3/10.
Sorry, but firstly, you put two sentences and the topic was one. And secondly the first sentence is wayyyyyy to long. I lost interest and didn't know what was going on. Split that into 2 or even 3.
One day, Harry Potter woke up.
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JustToby wrote:And it seems you don't get mine, it's meaning is that his adventures were all a dream. As a writer, I'm surprised you didn't get it.
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