@Holysocks: It's actually two. Stone maker refers to River. ._.
6/10. I would give the sentence a seven if not because of the 'for the first time that day'. That part can be cut out so that the meaning is more direct. I like how the consequence of the event is doing a normal activity to witnessing something not quite normal. I have my worry that it's not going to be interesting at the starter part.
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The tiger appeared again, this time closer to me.
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