Following Jenna's lead about titles, I'm starting a thread to get feedback on your first paragraph. Isn't that also something really important? It can make/break someones impression of the book. Some people say try to catch your reader within the first three paragraphs.
So, post your first pararaph (Hopefully not too long?) and get feedback!
Signs from God are rare. They are even rarer when carved into the rock you tripped over while running away from the hospital; I mean, how do you know this is really a sign from God and not a prank by the local neighborhood kids signed with the name "GOD". But this one had to be a real sign, right? It read: GET OVER YOUR HUSBAND. And how would the neighborhood kids know I had killed my own husband? Of course God would, but better yet, why would he tell me to get over it?
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