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Nocturne



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Sat Jun 13, 2020 10:04 pm
IamI says...



This poetic form is as follows:

Two stanzas of three unrhymed lines each

The first line is the same as the last.

For examples see my work in this site called Nightsongs: 15 nocturnes
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Mon Dec 20, 2021 2:36 am
Liminality says...



Don't underestimate how stupid we are,
us in the lantern-breeding town with our fairy books
the teeming of the lights in our heads

smells like fresh waterfalls and early stars
in a world tasting of metal in the smokescreen
don't underestimate how stupid we are.
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It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien