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Haiku Battle

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Sun Feb 20, 2011 5:20 am

TheEstimableEelz says...

And yet still peaceful
the wind shreds seedlings afresh;
spring's chipper chipmunk.

Formerly 'ilyaeelz.' Others experiment with drugs. I experiment with punctuation and grammar.

"Research your own experiences for the truth, absorb what is useful, reject what is useless, add what is specifically your own." - Bruce Lee

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Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:33 pm

Button says...

It climbed up my arm,
nimble as they are, and I
screamed as it attacked.

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Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:44 pm

322sivart says...

Luckily, with my
trusty leather gloves on, I
threw it in the woods

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Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:01 pm

lilymoore says...

Wooden like your heart,
thrown into the burning stove
and melting to ash.

Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.

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Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:03 pm

322sivart says...

The letter melting
in a fire slowly dying
Never seen again

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Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:07 pm

Button says...

were the lost in gray--
they were pale in the summer,
sleeping through the day.

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Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:34 pm

322sivart says...

After a night
Not easily forgotten
My head's in the clouds

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Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:41 pm

Button says...

falling through dark storms,
and tripping through the lightning;
death awaited me.

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Wed Feb 23, 2011 12:46 am

322sivart says...

Peter at the gates
called amongst the sequoiahs
older than himself

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Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:34 pm

Lumi says...

I spread my wings wide,
saw my mother's face once more,
and wept tears of joy.

I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.

-Shinji Moon

I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.

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Wed Feb 23, 2011 8:00 pm

Button says...

the heavenly choir
resounded; yet my song broke
under nostalgia.

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Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:43 pm

322sivart says...

I remember her.
Sweet and beautiful, she was.
I open my eyes.

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Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:27 pm

Button says...

And memory sings.
Images of her leak from
my eyes, cold and wet.

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Wed Mar 02, 2011 9:45 pm

Jagged says...

Tread softly, for this
is ice; water runs silent,
as grief also does.

Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET

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Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:13 am

Button says...

Glassy footsteps break
more easily than thought;
step lightly, dear ones.

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