"Aren't we forgetting something, guys?"
"Oh yeah," said Charlie. "We're meant to be running!"
He looked back to the others -- most of them were still in The Vault. Incognito seemed unwilling to leave after all those months of incarceration but with a YWSer grabbing each of her limbs they were slowly and surely prising her free. The mods were there too, searching for a hidden chamber by the looks of it. Lumi had brought his new friend: a puppy that appeared to know karate.
"Oh that's no PUN at all," Charlie muttered under his breath.
The zombies were back.
"We're so huuuuuungry!"
"I'll even review poetry for some food!!!"
"Anything -- even a chapter halfway through your novel..."
Charlie thought about it for a moment. That actually didn't sound like such a bad thing.
"Looks like the WRFF zombies are here," shouted Dreamwalker.
"Fall back to The Vault," Kitty15 ordered. "Kyll -- we need another review on those zombies."
To give Kyll credit, it was a good attempt. With YWSers running by, and the zombie horde shuffling forwards, Kyllorac didn't even blink as he/she stood against the tide and talked about characterisation and themes and pacing. These general comments should have scored great area-of-effect damage on the zombies, but for some reason it wasn't working.
"What's going on?"
"It's like they're resistant to reviews..."
"Kyll, get inside!"
Charlie couldn't bear to watch what happened next.
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