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Something is brewing in the kingdom of Sarla...


Welcome to Sarla, land of what was once chaos.

What we once were...

Criminal after criminal terrorized the land, killing of and robbing the citizens. Outraged, the kind had called for the Elites, a group of expert soldiers and trackers, to bring the criminals to justice. During this time, Prince Alastair had found himself falling hard for one of those criminals-- a mute thief named Lillith Marz. The pair figured out a way to cover Lillith's true identity, and she instead became the noble girl, Reina-- now Queen Reina the Trustworthy.

The king of that time has just died, leaving the throne to his son and daughter in law. He knew nothing of Reina's past, though he and Prince Alastair have their own secrets. Alastair never was the king's son. He was the son of a very close friend of the king, who was killed by an unknown assassin.

What we've become...

And now comes another threat to the throne. The criminals of old have escaped their prisons, or new ones have come from other kingdoms. It's all for one purpose and one purpose alone.

To overthrow the kingdom.

Led by a mysterious woman who hides herself behind veils and robes, the criminals hold secret meetings, intent on bringing Sarla to its knees. Nobody knows who the woman behind veils is, but she goes by the name Velia. Just Velia. Nobody knows where she came from, who she really is, or how she knows everything he does-- but it doesn't matter. As long as the criminals have somebody with unexplained sources on their side, they are content.

However, King Alastair has caught wind of what's going on. For the second time since his father's reign, the elites are sent out. A fresh generation of them, trained and seasoned. They are either tracker, or soldier. Their goal? Find and capture the criminals. Your pay doubles if you can bring him Velia.

You are either one of the criminals associated with Velia, or you are the Elite trackers and soldier trying to stop them.

Will Sarla be conquered, or will it be saved?
What secrets are lurking, just a brush of the finger away?
What truths will be exposed, and who will be betrayed?
It's all in your hands, now.


RULES

-All regular YWS rules apply

-All posts that aren't profiles, or actual posts go here-- Discussion Thread

-Absolutely no godmodding. Keep other people's character in character, do not attempt to take them over. It's not fair, and very, very annoying.

-NO perfect characters. Weaknesses must be real, and must have a real effect on your character. Weaknesses are what make them fun, and don't over-drive the strengths, either.

-Your characters can definitely have pets, but don't over-do it. We don't need three hundred animals running amuck through the SB. And please, no dragons or unicorns or mythical creatures. Keep the pets realistic.

-Please use correct grammar while posting. No netspeak allowed. Use complete sentences, capitalize your I's and the beginnings of names... all of the things you've known how to do since third grade. Oh, and please separate your posts with paragraphs. Big blocks of text are hard on the eyes.

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-Please put your character's name in bold at the top of your post.

-Posts must be at least 300 words long. (It's not much) You can check your word-count here if you aren't using Microsoft Word or OpenOffice. (This is NOT a maximum. The longer the post, the better ;))

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-If you do not obey the rules, or if you are inactive, your character will be killed off.

-And, last, but most certainly the most important rule of all, LavenderBlue is co-modding this story-book with me. Listen to her as much as you do me. If she tells you to do something, do it. She's as much in charge as I am.

Slots

The Royals

King Alastair: Octave
Queen Reina: LavenderBlue

The Criminals
Velia: Isha
Male Criminal: AngerManagement
Male Criminal: Skins
Male Criminal: NinjaCookieMonster
Male Criminal: Apple
Female Criminal: wickedwonder
Female Criminal: untameabletiger
Female Criminal: NinjaCookieMonster

The Elite Soldiers
Male Soldier: PhoenixBishop
Male Soldier: Scarlettfire
Male Soldier: LaceyDreadth
Female Soldier: PhoenixBishop
Female Soldier: LaceyDreadth

The Elite Trackers
Female Tracker: Puzzle
Female Tracker: ScarlettFire
Female Tracker: LaceyDreadth
Male Tracker: PinkShearwater

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Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:31 am
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save spot for female criminal?
  





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Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:13 am
ScarlettFire says...



Isha. You keep starting really cool SBs....

I claim a female tracker.

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Name: Niewén Windwolf.

Age: 22.

Gender: Female.

Rank: Elite Tracker.

Appearance: Niewén is about 5'7 tall with dark honey coloured hair that barely brushes her shoulders and dark blue eyes. She has pale skin and is athletic and strong, even if she doesn't look it. Prefers not wear dresses and if more often seen in a corseted top and pants. Wears knee-high boots and is never seen without her bow and arrows, or her sword (even if she doesn't use it often). Always has several daggers hidden on her person.
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Personality: Niewén is loyal (mostly), kind and caring--to a degree. She doesn't like to see those she cares about harmed, and if you do harm them--or even threaten them--she will not be happy. She's bold, blunt and is not afraid to start yelling if someone pisses her off. She's not shy at all and will not hesitate to slap someone--and this will mostly likely get her in trouble. Niewén also seems unafraid, but she's just hiding her fear well--one can tell if he or she checks Niewén's eyes as she tends to flick them away from the person if they're scaring her. Her father used to tell her that her eyes were a window into her soul and Niewén isn't sure if she should believe him or not. Unafraid to cause trouble if and when she can, Niewén's sure to be a handful. There is a problem, though. Niewén has a dark side she prefers to keep hidden, and sadly, said dark side has been running rampant. She's tried her best to keep it in check, but something has gone wrong. She can't control this side of her--at all.

Strengths: Loyal, kind, caring. Unafraid to let someone know they're annoying her, etc. Is a very good tracker, knows how to fight, run, hide, etc. Seasoned warrior.

Weaknesses: Tends to avoid eye contact when scared. Has a dangerous temper--that often leads to her dark side surfacing. A bit rebellious and a bit of a troublemaker. Can't control her dark side--at all.

History: Niewén grew up a peasant girl. She never thought she'd get far until one day she was recognized for her tracking abilities and was drawn into the training of Trackers for the Royalty. Over the years, she rose through the ranks, fought in a few wars and eventually became an Elite.

Not much is known about her younger years anymore, nor about her parents. According to many people, she was an orphan. Niewén doesn't mind what people think--she's a little busy. Tracking the criminals. Well, someone's got to do it.

Up For Love: Of course.

Other: Weapons; (Hardly Used) Sword:
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(Several) Daggers:
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And a Bow:
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Name: Cassian Karvan.

Age: 22.

Gender: Male.

Rank: Elite Soldier.

Appearance: Cassian is tall, about 6', with dark brown hair and dark brown eyes. He has lightly tanned skin and is athletic and strong. Always seen wearing armour over pants and a padded jerkin. Never seen without his weapons unless he's attending some kind of fancy party-thing.
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Personality: Cassian is loyal, fierce, kind and caring--to a degree. He doesn't like to see those he cares about harmed, and if you do harm them--or even threaten them--he will not be happy: He'll get revenge. He's bold, blunt and is not afraid to start yelling if someone pisses him off. He's not shy at all and will not hesitate to hit someone if he has to--and this will mostly likely get him in trouble. Cassian also seems unafraid, but he's just hiding the fear well--one can tell if he or she checks Cassian's eyes as he tends to flick them away from the person if they're getting to him--fear, anger, sadness, etc. He was once told that his eyes were a window into his soul and he isn't sure if he should believe that or not. Unafraid to cause trouble if and when he can, Cassian's sure to be a handful. He can have quite the temper, but rarely loses it. But be warned; when he does get angry, it's fiery. He only wants to keep the peace, even if that means riding into battle. Highly dislikes death and destruction but knows it's sometimes needed to bring peace.

Strengths: Loyal, kind, caring. Unafraid to let someone know they're annoying him, etc. Is a very good soldier--knows how to fight, run, hide, etc. Seasoned warrior. Close combat is preferred.

Weaknesses:Tends to avoid eye contact when scared. Has a dangerous temper--that often leads to him do stupids things. A bit rebellious and a bit of a troublemaker.

History: The son of a Lord who was a very well-known soldier, Cassian was born to be a warrior. From a young age, he was trained to fight and fight well. Sadly lost his parents and siblings when he was barely into his teens due to the enemy attacking his home while he was away at the King's palace; he is therefore the Lord Karvan now and has been since he was thirteen.

In truth, Lord Karvan, the father he knew, never really was his father. His mother had an affair with the another man and never told anyone. And so, Cassian grew up, the son of a Lord, an unknown son of....someone else. Today, his mother is dead but not before she told him the truth--in a letter he received only months ago. He keeps up a pretense of normalcy, but the news has him torn. Does he tell? Does her stay silent? Only time will tell. But he will stay silent for now--there's criminals to find so he's kind of preoccupied.

Up For Love: Of course.

Other: Weapons; Sword:
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Dagger:
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Last edited by ScarlettFire on Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:52 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:13 pm
NinjaCookieMonster says...



Two thieves (one female, one male) claimed!

So glad this is being given a second chance. ^_^
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take a sad song and make it better
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Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:07 pm
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I just realised Ishalala forgot to create a DT, so here's the link to it: post806962.html#p806962

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Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:20 pm
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Oh, I'm tempted... I haven't been in an Isha SB in, like, decades.

Umm... uh... argh... Hoodigoshpiel... Ah, go on then.

Can I claim a spot for a male criminal? Also, what time period is this set in? I'm guessing that it ain't modern times, but ya never know.
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Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:23 pm
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Name:Erian Whitedagger

Age: 16

Gender: female

Rank: (Soldier, Tracker, Criminal, Royalty) Criminal

Appearance:
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Personality:Erian Is very defensive and doesn't trust easily but if you break her trust, your in for A very hard time.. Erian is a perfectionist at everything she does and very good with rhythms and patters, like music. She is very sneaky, but she knows her boundary's .She is not an outgoing person, but she is not an antisocial person. She is very modest, and despises anyone who tries to pass her boundaries.Erian is the listening type so she knows how to manipulate words into something completely different.

Strengths: skilled fighter, good with rhythms and patterns,good talker, good climber, extremely good distraction, skilled with bows and arrows, daggers/swords and karate

Weaknesses:complete darkness, needles, pressure,large crowds, she gets distracted really easily, she has a weak spot in her lower back, she is very clumsy, her family and close friends, she is claustrophobic

History:Erian has been in a foster home ever since she was little with her brother. Her brother and Erian decided to run away when their foster dad started beating them and their foster mother. they have been on their own ever since and the only way for them to survive is to steal.

Up For Love: yep

Other: she carries two daggers at all times
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Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:19 pm
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EDIT:::: NO MORE criminals please! We need soldiers and another tracker... as well as the king. If anybody wants to take more than one character, feel free.
(I'll probably take a soldier if nobody else does, but I'll wait and see what you all want)

Definitely not modern. xD More medieval than anything.

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Mon Jan 10, 2011 12:17 am
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Note that there is a reason this profile is vague. There really isn't much known about her, and she's going to try keep it all a secret. She has her reasons >.>

Name: Velia

Age: Unknown (Thought to be between 17 and 25)

Gender: Female

Rank: Criminal Leader

Appearance: You don't know what she looks like. To you, she's a stranger cloaked behind veils, shrouded in robes, and over her eyes hangs a very low hood. Every so often, when she looks up high enough, you'll see her eyes. Blue and some say sad, others say fearless. Somehow, the hood doesn't seem to hinder her vision the slightest. You may even say that it's more keen. The only way you know she's even female is by the sound of her voice. She's not tall, not short, though this could be affected by shoes. Nobody really knows much about her appearance, either.

Personality: Velia could be summed up in a few words: Secretive, determined, and brave. She keeps everything about herself a very, very closely guarded secret, and nobody knows a pinch about her past, (with the exception of a few stories she tells to either scare or encourage the criminals) Anybody who asks about her past is sure to have a few quick, angry words fired at them, and nothing more. She's often seen scribbling in a notebook, though she never lets anybody see what it looks like-- especially the cover. She keeps it hidden in and inside pocket in her robe, and will bite the head off of anybody who tries to sneak a peak at it. She answers any questions not relating to her or her past calmly, and has an over-all calm composure. Though, if she's not in a meeting, she'll be gone. Nobody can ever find her, and she prefers that they don't look at all. When she's gone, she's gone for hours-- days, in some cases.

Strengths: She excels in keeping a very calm composure, and doesn't panic easily. So far, she's proven to be a good leader, and very trustworthy and loyal-- even despite her many, many secrets. She has a strange way of knowing what the King and his elites are up to, though she won't reveal her sources to anybody. She is also agile, though she prefers archery to close combat. She's an amazing archer, and seeing her miss her target is a very rare thing.

Weaknesses: She hates to expose herself to swords, or hand-to-hand combat in general. The fact that she wears so much to hide behind can slow her down with close-range fighting, which could explain why she avoids it. She doesn't open up to anybody emotionally, or at least, she tries her very hardest not to, and doesn't know the criminals as well as she's led them to believe she does. Her disappearances have roused many questions-- and she's even missed some of her own meetings for them.

History: Her history is completely unknown to everybody. Some say she was a famous criminal who managed to escape the grip of the elites, and is still in hiding today.
Others say she was the victim of abuse in the palace-- a used servant perhaps?
Some say that she's from a kingdom nowhere near Sarla. Perhaps she's even royalty from there, or a spy. Maybe there's more to taking over Sarla than she's been letting on.
They're all just rumors, and it's doubtful that any are accurate.

Up For Love: Hahaha... probably not, but we'll see.

Other: NEVER seen unless she's heavily robed and veiled. You try to touch her, or pull away her veil in any way, and you will end up with an arrow through the heart or many a broken bone.
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Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:34 am
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Here is my profile!

Name: Dutch (He doesn't use his real name as he finds it dull).

Age: Eighteen

Gender: Male.

Rank: (Soldier, Tracker, Criminal, Royalty) Criminal

Appearance: Dutch is a rather good looking boy though he isn't exactly extraordinary. With dark hair that is always ruffled no matter how many times he tries to tame it, the darn thing just won't settle. The back of it is always spiked, only two large strips on either side of his bangs are straight. His large, caramel brown eyes make him look younger then he actually is though his height seems to add on a few years. With a large, thin build, Dutch stands at five foot eight. He considers himself short amongst others and wears heeled boots to give him a larger appeal.

Personality: Dutch is a very awkward person. He gets nose bleeds around extremely pretty girls and blushes whenever he is put under the spotlight, in all honestly, Dutch is someone that most avoid. He can be serious when he wants to be though he usually screws this up by crashing into something. Dutch is very childish and outspoken, he doesn't really think about what he's doing and just follows through with it. In one word, Dutch is a complete airhead.

Strengths: He isn't strong, in the least, and he isn't at all smart, though Dutch is fast on his feet and good at hiding. After all, he has been doing it all his life. Dutch can make a hiding spot out of only a few materials but that is probably the only useful thing he can do. Even though he grew up with a rather horrible life, Dutch likes to see the better things . Dutch can always produce a ray of light from a rainy day, this is often why people stick around him.

Weaknesses: Dutch more or less is a screw up, his father said so before he had died. Dutch cannot read between the lines; thinking that everything will be served to him straight on a silver platter. He doesn't like riddles and can easily get infuriated when he doesn't seem to get something (which is all the time). His strength is pathetic and his brains, don't even get me started. Dutch is also awkward when it comes to talking to people. He often will shy away and if they're a girl, he'll just blush like crazy until the female practically runs away in fear that Dutch will have a heart attack. Even though he is quick on his feet, Dutch is extremly clumsy and usually gives himself away by creating a large noise.

History: Dutch grew up on the wrong sides of the streets, I guess you could say. With a depressive mother and a father who liked to drink his days away, Dutch knew he had to take his brother's and sister's salvation into his own hands. From an early age, Dutch had to revert to pick pocketing to be able to just place food on the table and that wasn't much either. Dutch had never liked the King or the kingdom of Sarla, he often blamed the royals for his poverty. After hearing the stories of the brave criminals who had tried yet failed to conquer Sarla, Dutch had always fantasised about being one of the thieves to over throw the kingdom.

Up For Love: Yeppums.

Other: Other then his obsessive nose bleeds around females, Dutch hasn't got any other quirks that really stand out. He sometimes stutters when he's nervous (practically always), and loves to eat when he is tired. I don't put this lightly either, he LOVES to eat.
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Mon Jan 10, 2011 12:42 pm
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Name: Keiko Reid

Age: 15

Gender: female

Rank: (Soldier, Tracker, Criminal, Royalty) Jewel thief and con.

Appearance: Keiko is very, very pale, and it makes her eyes (light green and jumpy) pop. She has long eyelashes and a wiry, athletic build. After she ran away from what she calls her "first life" (living with her family, and then the Sparrows), she dyed her hair bright sapphire blue, with a dye that hasn't come out in six years. It sticks out just a wee bit, though, so she usually has it twisted up under a black beanie. She has a long, pale scar twisting from the back of her neck, around her side, and across her lower back.

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Personality: She's an outgoing, spunky, loving girl around people she knows and possibly likes, but she has a fierce shield up. She doesn't trust easily, not in the slightest. She doesn't talk about her past, or her beliefs, or what she wants to be. She just acts. She's a tough girl, and has high pain tolerance. She can get mean, even cruel, when you cross her, so be careful.

Strengths: She's light on her feet and quick, and climbs like she's half monkey. She's one of the best fist fighters you'll probably see, and lies as easily as she breathes. She can power through tough conditions, and she works best during cold nights. Guys are not a distraction for her, and she's stealthy enough to cross a field of, I don't know, bubble wrap, without making a sound. She's got experience with soldiers, and some of the attitude has rubbed off on her, as much as it pains her to admit.

Weaknesses: She doesn't do blades. Knives, swords, even arrowheads- she can't fight with any of them. Her long distance aim isn't really the best (and that's an understatement), and if something's in her hand, it has to stay still. If it twists, slips, or moves in any way, she will drop it. If something's pretty, expensive, or shiny, it'll be in her pocket in a split second. Other than boys, anything on earth will distract her, and her heavy reliance on sugar and adrenaline makes her jumpy.

History: Keiko comes from Jentira, a kingdom southwest of Sarla. Her father was in the military there, and to prove that he was a tough, no-games sort of man to his commander, he'd beat Keiko every other night. None of her brothers ever felt his wrath- they only hid and sacrificed their sister without a second thought. When she was nine, she couldn't take it anymore, and ran away. She managed to get herself to Sarla, where she fell into a group of thieves, the Sparrows, who supported her, taught her, and loved her. When she was twelve, they were massacred by the Elites.

She's been on her own since then, operating as a jewel thief, and conning people out of their money when she can. She's a thief by trade, but a scared, haunted girl by nature.

Up For Love: Nope! Taken.

Other: Her mother loved blue butterflies. So, naturally, Keiko's first big steal was a necklace with a sapphire butterfly. She wears it under her shirt. She can't sleep at night, because she gets vivid nightmares that throw her game off for days. She's become sort of nocturnal because of it.

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Name: Hunter Collins

Age: 15 and a half. Do not ever forget the half.

Gender: Male.

Rank: (Soldier, Tracker, Criminal, Royalty) Pickpocket, market thief, and information provider extraordinaire.

Appearance: Hunter's lean and lightly tanned. His hair is very dark brown and fluffy. (But don't tell him that last part.) He has blue eyes that pierce through his mop of hair, and a sun is tattooed just behind his ear. He usually brushes his hair in such a way that it covers that up. He's a smiley type of person, and it's rare to see him frowning. Even when he's running for his life, he's beaming because of the fun of it.

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Personality: He's a bit of a slippery character, but don't think that means he's a liar. He's actually brutally honest most of the time. He's a sweet guy, really, and chivalrous even though he lives a criminal's life. He gets pushy sometimes, and he doesn't realize when he's crossed the line. He'll do anything to protect what he loves. When he gets cranky, he's a living nightmare, so don't wake him up unless you really, really have to.

Strengths: Friendly and trustable- which doesn't mean trustworthy. He doesn't really get a guilty conscious. He's good with weapons, especially nice, big swords, and he's clever. Once he's focused, he doesn't get unfocused, and he puts up with insults and pain well. He's good with horses (or more commonly for his area, donkeys) and he's openminded to a lot of ideas.

Weaknesses: He's a sucker for crying girls of any age. He's reckless and doesn't really think about the dangers of something before doing it. His brain totally goes out the window when he's put under pressure. Instead of crying when he's put under extreme pain, he passes out. He can come off as annoying. He hates, hates, hates snakes, and will go blank if you even start talking about them. Awful, awful, awful liar.

History: Hunter was put in an overcrowded orphanage in the heart of Sarla, but he only stayed there until he was eight, and then he was booted out for more room. Like Keiko, he fell into the Sparrows. He was there for about a year before she came. They were separated after the massacre- he's only heard rumors of her since.

He got into the habit of stealing from the market, coins and food instead of sparkly things. He also started trading information for money- something as little as what someone was wearing fed him for a week. He does what he can to survive, and hopes that someday, he'll find the last living Sparrow.

Up For Love: Noooo. Taken.

Other: Doesn't like it when people are upset. Is living next to Keiko in a cheap, but cozy inn, without knowing it.
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Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:35 pm
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Name: Beatrice Lovelace (goes by Bee)

Age: 33

Gender: Female

Rank: Soldier

Appearance: She has dark black hair and a pale round face with a strong jaw. She wears a long black cloak/dress that holds most of her weapons. She is tall and physically toned from all of her training. She has dark green eyes that often twinkle with mischief.
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Personality: She has been labelled as a sociopath with childlike tendencies. This is shown by her demeanour. She often giggles even if something isn’t funny; even worse she has a tendency to giggle when hurting or killing people. She is easily bored and if that happens she becomes petulant and whiney. She has no idea about personal space and often evades people’s personal spaces without thought.

Strengths: While slightly unbalanced she is known for her skill, as she is one of the few Elite women soldiers. She is decent at hand to hand combat, but she specializes in long range knife throwing. She carries several weapons on her person. She has spring-loaded holsters on her wrists and ankles which carry her small arrow-like darts, and thin needles. Her last hiding place is her belt lined with throwing stars. She is deadly accurate with all of these weapons. All of these weapons are pure black to conceal them in the night.

Weaknesses: While where the coat her moves are slightly sluggish as it is a bit heavy with all the knives. While good at fighting her size does pose an issue if the person is bigger than her and properly trained. She can easily be taken by a man with solid training if he gets close enough. She also can only carry so many throwing weapons. Her inability to take anything seriously makes her a liability. She is also overconfident at times and tends to underestimate her opponents. She has a weakness for her brother.

History: Her father was an elite soldier during the first criminal uprising. Convinced it would happen again he trained his daughter. His methods of training were harsh. He locked her room and fed her very little, rats entered her room every night and she was forced to hunt them down and kill them with a dagger. He beat her daily to show her to feel no pain and forced her to murder tied up criminals. If she refused he would beat her until she did. Eventually she killed without question. Her mother became pregnant with another child. Damaged, she recognized the danger the new child would be in so she killed her father and trained her brother in her own way.

Up For Love. No

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Name: Lyle Lovelace

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Rank: Soldier

Appearance: Dark hair and light blue eyes with freckles on his face. He has a baby face that makes him look even younger than he is. He is skinny with strong legs and arms from his acrobatic training.
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Personality: He is the balance to his sister. While she likes to play with her opponents he wishes to end things as quickly as possible. He does feel remorse over killing and hurting people, but this does not slow him down from doing so. When he deals with sister with his is often easperated and takes on the role of an authoritative parent talking to a misbehaving child. Because of this he is usually always stressed thus has little patience and gets annoyed quickly. He is a stickler for time and frowns on those who have no respect for time management.

[b] Strengths: Lyle is a formidable hand-to-hand combatant, utilizing a unique form of martial arts that attacks the pressure points on the human body. By striking these, he is able to paralyze, cause intense pain or even kill. He is nearly flawless balance; acrobatic skills and flexibility make him a formidable opponent despite his age. He sees no use in weapons

Weaknesses: While skilled in close combat he lacks any long range fighting abilities. He also does not have any weapons. While he has trained to fight against people with weapons it still can be dangerous to take on a person with a sword with just hands. He is also very young and can be taken by more seasoned fighters. He has a weakness for his sister.

History: He never knew his father as his sister had killed him before he was born, but he still was trained from an early age. He became bored of the life and abandoned when he was 13. He joined a travelling circus using his acrobatic skills to entertain rather than kill. When the criminal world resurfaced in force his sister found him and he rejoined the Elites to hunt down all the criminals.

Up For Love: No
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Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:29 pm
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*Will finish later*


Name: Reina (the Trustworthy)

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Rank: Royalty, specifically the Queen

Appearance: Reina has honey-coloured hair that is naturally curly. She has small piercing eyes and a sly smile is always on her face, making her seem defiant and mysterious. Her hair is most always done up with wildflowers. She has a thin body structure and tends to veer towards clothing that is very simplistic to the usual attire of royalty in Sarla. Reina stands about 5'7.
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Personality: Reina can be very stubborn at times, but usually her nicer personality shows. She can be extremely charming when she wishes to. Reina, though she is very strong-minded, refuses to take part in any politics of her country and merely likes to laze around in her rich dresses and eat her fine foods. Sometimes, however, she may take an interest in her country and help her husband, the King, with his expected duties. When pleased or entertained, Reina is light, humourous and joyful and appears to not have a care in the world. Reina appears kind to those close and friendly toward her, but Reina will not sympathize with the poorer folk of her kingdom. Obviously, she's spoiled, but sometimes a kind heart does show.

Strengths: Reina uses her muteness to her advantage at times, and can get away from situations she'd rather not be involved in quite easily. She can be very manipulative for wanted things such as jewellery, but she won't manipulate people. She can handle a dagger, but clumsily, and only when in dire need will she use the not-even-a-skill skill.

Weaknesses: Reina is useless in weaponry and just as her muteness may be an advantage, it is more a disadvantage for obvious reasons. Plus, she loves spending money on clothes, jewellery etc.

History: Reina was originally Lilith Marz, a well-known criminal, but when she met Alastair, it was a forbidden love. But, with the ability to pull a few a strings, Alastair was able to marry the love of his life. Lilith had to change her name then to Reina and she wa since proved to be a woman worthy of the status of "Queen".

Up For Love: Well, she's kinda married to the King. You can try, but I don't think anything would happen :P

Other: Remember, she's mute.
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Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:26 am
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I've checked this profile over with Isha.


Name: Felix Chahta

Age: Eighteen

Gender: Male

Rank: Criminal

Appearance: He's a good looking kid, and uses that to his advantage. Felix has messy dark brown hair and light blue eyes. He's got rather tanned skin and stands at about 6 foot. He's most likely to be dressed in rags and whatnot because he doesn't have much money, plus dressing tidy means effort. Like the picture, but obviously less modern looking... (Looking at the picture, the guy in it's quite nice actually.. Yum)
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Personality: Felix is an outgoing guy who isn't afraid to speak his mind. He can often come across as harsh or thoughtless. He is extremely flirtatious and is always willing to stand up for what he believes in. He often gets into trouble due to how impulsive he is. Although Felix can come across as cocky and careless, he's a decent guy really, just bitter. He loves nothing more than having a good time and looking big and brave. He's a great liar, but it doesn't matter much because he normally tells people what he thinks. Felix is kind of dumb, so he's not good when it comes to common sense. He also doesn't care much for himself, so the thought of dying doesn't bother him much. That helps with the impulsiveness.

Strengths: Due to Felix not caring much about whether he lives or dies, he's a very brave guy. He'll be the first to do "the scary thing that no one else will". I guess you could call him confidence a strength. If anyone's ever worried about saying something, he'll happily say it for them. He's also entertaining to be around so no one is bored when they're around him. He's also a serial flirter, and with the help of his looks, he can get a lot of girls to do what he wants.

Weaknesses: He's pretty dumb, but it's not really his fault because he didn't have a chance of an education. He's also not a very big people person, and it's seriously hard to get close to him. That can cause problems because he doesn't trust people, so he's not the best at team effort things. Felix can also get very annoying, especially for people who don't like him much anyway. He's basically pretty easy to hate, also because he thinks that every girl is in love with him.

History: He doesn't really have much of a history. He's just some kid from wherever. Felix doesn't have much money at all, but it doesn't bother him because he's used to it. He's had some tough times as a kid, but he says nothing about it, so his past is a taboo subject. Because of that, no one really knows much about his history. It basically involves a lot of violence and loneliness. His past has effected the way he behaves now. It's why he struggles to trust people, for example.

Up for Love? Sure.

Other: Nothing right now... but maybe later.
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Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:58 am
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