Hello lovelies. This is a storybook based in the late 18th century, in the city of Boston, Massachusetts. The premise here is to have your characters running around and, to make things interesting, trying to kill one another. This is so because some of you will be assassins being paid to hunt the authorities who are after them, and some of you will be officers paid to bounty hunt the assassins. A few of you, of course, could be whoever you like: a travelling rogue, a popular bartender, a mob boss, a prostitute.. Supporting characters make everything wonderful.
The thing that's happening here is that you have several young assassins working primarily independently, but who gather and plot together occassionally as well. In a secret underground hideaway, an elaborate home sits, housing the slyest of the sly, those of have limited, if any, morals. You have mercenaries, hard-working, professional thieves, cunning swindlers, and desperate drug dealers who are all willing to commit murder, for a price. Above ground of course, you have, several miles away, a station, a home for officers, guards and detectives, all conspiring with their beloved, daredevil, money-hungry bounty hunters.
Already one on each side has been killed; although neither is to know of the other's existence, both are hyper-aware of the fact that they're being hunted. Some may even be infiltrating the others as a spy, and relaying information to the authorities whilst posing as a heartless assassin.
Our story starts with one of our characters strolling the streets of Boston, looking for an elder gentlewoman who runs a local brothel. It's unknown why, and the method wasn't specified, but she is to be dead by the end of the week.
- First of all, be coherent. Show your writing ability within your profile, and I'll approve it if I think your grammar is up to par. Badly written six-sentence posts about absolutely nothing are something nobody wants to read. And, like Griffinkeeper mentioned in another storybook, you can ignore an above post if it's just outright terrible, and it confuses you and everybody else.
- Secondly, no anime characters, or small, slim, but brilliant little girls with fox ears and incredible sex appeal. I'm not going to not reject profiles that I think are ridiculously overdone or simplistic. Admit that you've read 20+ profiles that are all pretty much, "Age: 16; Height: 5'6", Personality: She's very quiet, but when she opens her mouth she'll always manage to say something useful. She keeps a small group of friends because she tends to shut people out," OR, "Happy, bubbly and hyper, but very smart, almost on a genius level." Yeah... No.
- I'm going to make you write out flaws, important, relevant flaws that are ACTUAL flaws, unlike "She cares for her friends too much, will do anything," "He has quite a temper, but is actually a pretty nice guy." If you write temper as your flaw, I will not accept it. Under no circumstances will I accept it. Everybody has a temper, and I don't care how explosive it is for him, there has to be something else. And nothing like a chocolate allergy. If he has a chocolate allergy he's not going to eat chocolate -- oh my goodness, problem solved. Make your characters human.
BALANCE OUT YOUR FLAWS AND SKILLS. Alright, so she's incredibly gorgeous and witty and cunning and can slit your throat before you feel the knife, and that's all well and good. But, you manage to write your flaws, the flaws I so dearly, desperately urge you to write, and you end up saying, "So, she's kind of shy around people, and only okay with a gun. She's full of herself and turns her peers off, making her not the most well-liked of theg group." Now that, that doesn't seem fair to me. She can leap from building to building, but oh no, she's not likable and can't use a gun very well. Yeah. No. Here is an example of what I would like you to write:
"When he was younger, he was climbing a tree with one of his friends before falling fifteen feet to the ground and breaking his ankle. He can walk perfectly fine, but when he sprints he often slows after a minute because his ankle is shooting pains up and down his leg. He relies heavily on not getting caught and chased for that reason, and also because he's pitiful when it comes to hand-to-hand combat, and when punched, drops to the ground and most of the time, doesn't get up. Personality-wise he's lovely and charming, but he secretely hates nearly everybody, making him dangerously untrustworthy."
This example is good and dandy because it's relevant to the story - if this boy is an assassin, he'll be running away from people, and he can't defend himself if he falls and his pursuer throws a punch. If he couldn't use a gun, okay, he'll use a dagger. If he's full of himself, he's an assassin, and if he's good at what he does he doesn't need many friends. Make it good, okay? Don't be afraid to make your character just suck horribly as a human being.
- Sex, gore and cursing are indeed allowed, but keep in mind that this is a young writers website. Don't go overboard, please.
- Don't kill other people's characters, please. That's just not nice.
- No god-modding. No stupid, perfect characters that are natural-born leaders and who overtake the storybook. This storybook doesn't have a protaganist. It has like, 9.
- NOBODY. UNDER. 18. NO. No teenybopper prodigies running around murdering people .
- Also like Grif mentioned once before, if you're going to write a dialogue, finish it. Don't have seventeen posts just for one simple scene, where nothing in the end was actually said, such as "Hello, Jack." *waits for other person to post* "Hello, Melanie." *waits* "I see you're wearing green today. It looks nice." *waits* "Thanks." Yeah. Don't do that. If the person has done a good job on their profile, and you've read what the character's done and said so far, you can guess what they're going to say, and I'm sure nobody will get mad at you.
- Have romance, sure. But don't go overboard, please. Love can easily consume your life and mind, but there's more out there than an adorable, dimply smile, and how his hot breath felt against your forehead when he kissed it.
- Minimum 200 word posts. No maximum, yay.
If you have a problem with any of the rules, just PM me, and we can work something out if it really will cause a problem for you.
Now dearies, here is the recommended template. If it has an asterisk*, it's completely optional:
Name: Their name.
Gender: Male, Female, or unspecified.
Age (18+): How old they are.
Profession: What they do for a living. Can definitely have a nighttime and daytime profession (dirty and lawless, clean and legal, respectively)
Appearance: What they look like, what they wear, hair color, build, usual expression and so forth.
Skills: What they're good at.
Flaws: What makes them human.
*Interesting Facts: Anything worth mentioning that isn't specified above.
*Equipment: What they keep on them most/all the time.
Associates: Other storybook characters they've met before.
History: Where they grew up, who they were born to, how they came to be who they are today, and why they chose to do what they do.
Have fun, lovelies. Thus far we have:
Bounty Hunters:
tanith14 as Captain Christopher Jefferson.
Lumierre as Admiral Benjamin Hargreaves.
Apple as Gabriel.
Assassins:
jasminebells as Delilah.
Daydreams as Daniel Swift.
LoveableLittleSock as Noah.
Thieves, and other supporting characters:
kidashka as Shari.
fictionfanatic as Ace.
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