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Wed Apr 07, 2010 11:30 pm
Forestqueen808 says...



Lynn

"Did you see two boys run off?" Ciaran finally asked me.

"Um, no. I was mainly looking down the whole time," I said. "If I hadn't I probably wouldn't have bumped into you."

"Yeah, you would have just been staring," he smiled, and laughed.

"Yeah, I probably would have been, and then run into a pole." I laughed, Ciaran seemed like a nice guy...but it was weird that I ran into him AGAIN.
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and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


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Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:27 am
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Jager-
I sighed and handed over her ribbons, groaning when she quickly put them back on.
" Thank you," she mumbled." W-well, goodbye." I waved as she scurried off, leaving too, headed for the park.--- I was just strolling along when something hard hit my head.
" Ow," I yelled. I stood up and faced a guy, he was so obviosly part of the Zodiac, monkey by the look of those ears, and that tail.
" Sorry," he squealed, turning to take off, but then he abruptly stopped. " Hey, you have horns." I rubbed my head.
" That I do." He face lit up and I rolled my eyes.
" You're..part of the-"
" I'm the Boar." He jumped up and did a mid-air flip.
" I knew it," he took me by the hand and I pulled away from him.
" Oh, then you absolutely have to meet my friend! She.." I pulled away from him and started walking away.
" Listen," I called back," just because you know who I am doesn't mean were going to be good friends."
" Ah ha! Found you, another's voice called," female this time. I turned around breifly and quickly lost intrest when I saw it was just the some girl talking to the monkey boy.
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 2:09 pm
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Lilia

"You don't go to school then?" Train asked me as I gathered a handful of the sweets and then tried to duck behind him. He turned in confusion and I scampered away but not in time to escape her. I squealed as Enya's hand snatched my wrist and she pulled me toward her. Looking over at Noah he gave a playful shrug and held his empty hands out. Like I needed him to show me that his prey had escaped. He was standing there with three other children including a red haired girl. Huh. More strays? Man, this street was getting too busy for comfort.

"Let me go, let go!" I wriggled, trying to free myself but Enya was stronger.

"Got you rat," she sneered. I looked at Train, entreating him to help me but quickly switched tactics when I saw a familiar face in the crowd.

"Devyn help me, she caught me!" I called, the panic rising in my belly at being held captive. Even if it was half a game. It still made me afraid, I couldn't help it. "Please Enya, please. I won't prank you anymore, I promise!"

"I think you should let her go," Train said suddenly. He took a firm step forward.
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 5:38 pm
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~Enya~

I held on to Lilia's wrist tighter. "And who are you to tell me what to do?" I sneered, She pranks me all the time. It's super annoying and it never stops. I have to get back at her some how. For everything. I hissed.

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Thu Apr 08, 2010 8:09 pm
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(My name is Roxy)
Roxy:

Someone ran into me. I fell to the ground and he looked at me surprised "Whoops." He said
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