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The Kingdom Keepers



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Tue Oct 30, 2007 4:07 pm
Stori says...



The story: five teens were cast as DHIs, or Disney Host Interactives. These are holograms that guide vistiors through Magic Kingdom. The DHIs, led by Finn Whitman, saved the Kingdom from disaster.

A year later, other DHIs are cast for the parks. It looks like evil is not far away...

Name: Mark
Description: Quiet, serious and scientific, he is thrilled to be cast as a DHI.
Park: MGM Studios

I must have a fever or something. This isn't real. Mark looked around. This was MGM all right. He was standing in front of the Star Tours ride, near the life-sized walker.

The park look deserted, all the lights out. Yet somehow he could see.

"Hi there," said a voice behind him.

Mark spun to face an old man. He was dressed as a cast member, in khaki shirt and pants. His blue eyes shone merrrily. "My name's Wayne. I guess you could say I take care of this place"
"The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart."
Miles Vorkosigan

"You can be an author if you learn to paint pictures with words."
Brian Jacques
  





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Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:43 pm
TNCowgirl says...



I'll post when i get my keyboad working.



Name: Lacey
Description: Shy, not talkative, careful, pretty, brown hair, blue eyes, athletic, but skinny.
Park: MGM Studios
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
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Wed Oct 31, 2007 12:14 am
Maybe says...



Ah, i loved this book. Read it in a bout 2 hours. I'm definatly in!

Name: Cameron
Age: 15
Appearance: Tall and slim with short brown hair thats always spiked up. Green eyes.
Personality: Witty, a trouble-maker, mischievous, and charming. He is down to earth, and can be really mysterious and secretive at times, which only adds to his charming effect. He is really good at hiding his emotions and preers people not knowing what he's thinking.
Park: MGM (And animal kingdom, if thats allowed. If not, i'll just stick to MGM)


Ok, quick question: This is Disney World in Florida, right? Cuz if it's California, i dont know what/where anyhing is. I know the florida one like the back of my hand, though. ^.^
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Wed Oct 31, 2007 12:25 am
TNCowgirl says...



((I think I'm gonna end up lookin really stupid here, cause I don't know a thing about what you are talkin about))
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Wed Oct 31, 2007 4:37 am
sasquash says...



I read the book too, but i cant add a character right now, ill add soon though, so consider me in the storybook!
It's ok to be a kid sometimes,

it's what keeps old people young

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Wed Oct 31, 2007 3:05 pm
Stori says...



Yeah, it's the Disney in Florida. I'be been to all the parks.

Mark looked around. "Hmm... Well, I don't see why I'm here. Everything is so quiet."

Suddenly, a flurry of beeping and whistling reached his ears. He turned in surprise to see a little barrel-shaped robot coming towards him. "Artoo!"

"Bless you," said Wayne.

"No, I saw Artoo!"
"The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart."
Miles Vorkosigan

"You can be an author if you learn to paint pictures with words."
Brian Jacques
  








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