Young Writers Society

OK, so put your ideas and such, here.!!!! IT seemed like we needed this so here it is

Cool, I need a guy to appear next to me, from either side, and I'm a hopeless romantic so...hopefully thats self explainatory ^.^

I don't have any idea right yet, but people are getting confused all too easily on this storybook. It's unnerving.

It's because few are communicating outside the storybook, to make things work within the storybook.

Does any one have any idea where this particular battle is going?

Not one, there should be something that breaks it up. Its got to end sooner or later, that way the charctors can meet.

Maybe it'll have something to do with the guy (who's yet to show up) with my character.

I think the good guys should lose this one.

I have an idea for how this would work.

Stern sees that the allies cannot win this battle, because the Undead and Demons have too many troops. He sounds the retreat for his batallion, advising the elven leader to the same. They can't just cut and run, or they will lose more men. So Stern would call on the powers of Pelor and bring back the fallen troops that swore an Oath to defend the land for one final mission. It would be undead versus undead, and it would give the allies time to fall back.

Stern would,of course, be fatigued after the ordeal and probably collapse from using so much magical energy during the battle.

...This would all take place after an epic battle between Lucien, Karklen, Stern, Jerek, Ara, Bella, and whomever else wants to join in.

What say you all?

Sure, but Ara isn't going to be any better energy wise either.

If we don't hear from Kavor soon, should we go ahead with it? Say...two days?

Sounds good to me. Dono, what would we do if you weren't organized?

The world would collapse in upon itself!

No, not really. But the storybook might collapse into monotony and fall victim to the "leaderless, direction-less storybook" virus.

that wouldn't be good

no...that would be a very long boring battle

Ok, I'm assuming control of this storybook.

Here's how we're gonna do this, let me know if you agree.

Stern and Co are going to fight Lucien and Karklen. Before they can finish the fight, though, Stern is gonna call the retreat and play his biggest card, calling on Pelor to revive the dead allied forces fro one final battle while the army makes their escape. Once we get all that done, we'll work on adding some depth to the story.

Let me know, and add any ideas for characters, please.

I all for it, whose Co, I;ll go look real fast but I don't remember that name.