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Pendragon



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Tue Sep 18, 2007 5:13 am
Firestalker says...



okay those who have not read the books by D.J MacHale then check the following links.(Be warned the links contain spoilers.)

1. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Pendragon_Adventure

2. http://www.thependragonadventure.com/

Okay those who have read the books or checked the links here are the rules.



1. No killing characters without the permission of the creators.

2. Remember that Acolytes cant use the flumes.

3. Do not post until you get a fair idea of what this storybook is about.

4. Do not stop posting in the middle of the story.

5. Travelers hate to kill or hurt others..

6. And remember that in this storybook expect the unexpected.



Character profile



Name - Name of character
Territory - Territory of character
Age - age of character
Acolyte - If any acolyte to that character
Weapons - (Normally travelers don't have weapons and cant take weapons where they go, but mention the weapons they are familiar with.)
Bio - How the character became a traveler or acolyte or something alse.




My character profile



Name - Lee
Territory - Cloral
Age - 16
Acolyte - Minil
Weapons - Familiar with all Cloral weapons. Familiar with other territory weapons a little too.
Bio - Told that he was a traveler at the age of 13. It took him three years to accept his fate and work as a traveler.
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Are you Insane the same man asks, - "Oh yes!. The Mad Hatter being saner!"
  





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Tue Sep 18, 2007 11:15 am
motherflippinflapjacks says...



Should we pick characters from the actual books, or can we create new ones as well?

(And thank you for creating this! I love these books. :) )
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Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:15 pm
TNCowgirl says...



*i'll join later when i get more time*
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:26 am
Firestalker says...



You can do both. I personally recommend that you make a new character, but an existing character is okay. Its your choice.
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:48 am
TNCowgirl says...



Name - Senna
Territory - Veelox
Age - 15
Acolyte - Spindel
Weapons - Knives and guns
Bio - All Senna has ever known was being a Travler, she can't remember anything from before the age of 10. She is hard, she doesn't know love (family, etc.) and sets straight on for whatever task she is sent on.
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:58 am
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Acolytes are men and women who help the Travelers. The Acolytes use their knowledge of Halla to help the Travelers defeat Saint Dane. They supply the Travelers with information and supplies, such as transportation and clothing. They cannot travel between territories by themselves but can travel if with a Traveler (however in the 5th book "Black Water" it is revealed that acolytes can travel through flumes, but damaging them in the process).

Acolytes each receive a ring through which they can receive things from the Travelers, and send things to other acolytes. When there is a new Acolyte, the old Acolyte does not die, but merely passes on the responsibility.

I'll post as soon as i can.
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 2:27 am
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Name - Althea
Territory - Zadaa
Age - 14
Acolyte - no acolyte (is one).
Weapons - spears, electrified rods, steel arrows, wooden clubs, and staves
Bio- Althea is the younger sister of the newest traveler on Zadaa, her brother Wellar. They are very rare people as their mother is a Batu and their father a Rokador. They live right on the river of Zadaa. Althea is just learning the ways of being an Acolyte, but her brother and the ex acolyte, Saangi, are helping her along. She hopes to one day maybe travel to another world with her brother.
  





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Thu Oct 04, 2007 5:56 pm
Stori says...



Can I join? Thanks.
Name: Jacob
Territory: Denduron
Acolyte: Barnes

Weapons: spear, sword.
Personality: Has a very outgoing facade, but underneath he's all steel. He takes his duty as a Traveler very seriously.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 1:50 am
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*ok, so i'm gonna start*


Senna sat down in her chair. She sighed,

"You want a drink or something?" Spindel asked her,

"Yes, if you dont' mind." He laughed,

"You really aren't as hard as everyone thinks." She jumped up and grabbed him by the kneck smiling, he was several years younger then her.

"Anyone finds that out your toast," She grinned he was shaking, "Don't be scared, I'm just playin'." He laughed as she let him go. He would be happy go lucky when he got back. He was right though. SHe wasn't very friendly to anyone but him. SHe had grown to like him. Love, no, no one deserved her love. WHatever it was, no one had given it to her, but maybe Spindel, course she wouldn't know if he did.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 1:56 am
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Name - Arreanda (challenger black)

Territory - Quillen

Age - 24

Acolyte - Sabier (Her clueless 30 year old brother)

Weapons - Typical challenge weapons.

Bio - Her mom's best friend from school told her about it when she was about eight, after her parents died, when she took Arreansa and Sabier in. Although her guardian died when she was about eighteen, Arreanda was aware of her basic duties as a traveler and has been to Second Earth, First Earth, Cloral, Zadaa, and Eelong. But she is still very naive, she thinks everyone is either good or evil, and expects them to act as such. She became a challenger at age 20 to get an inside look at the government, as you can tell, because she is still alive, she is very skilled in the challenger games.

Looks - Hair: Blond, straight and mid length
Skin: pretty pale, but not totally white
Height: 5' 3"
Body type: short and skinny
Eyes: Green
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:23 am
Firestalker says...



Everyones posting character profiles and not posting. I cant post because i need a character to come to the flume. So someone who still is looking or waiting for someone to post then just post that you come in the flume to Cloral okay. Then i can post.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:08 pm
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I stood in front of the Flume. "Denduron!"

The musical notes began, then the light. The walls became crystal.

Another Traveler hurtled out. He landed, glanced at me and smiled. "You're from Denduron right?"

"Yeah, I am. I'm just going back."

He thrust out a hand. "Bobby Pendragon, from Second Earth."

"Jacob," I replied.

He grinned. "Well, nice to meet you. Here's your ride!"

I looked and sure enough the flume was coming for me. I waved goodbye as the light swallowed me up.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:16 pm
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"Spindel I'll be back!" She called, she stood in front of the flume. "Cloral" She said, the musical notes began, then the light, and then the walls became crystal. She jumped in the flume and waited.


*Sorry tis short, I'll have to get used to this one cause I"ve never read the books *
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 5:16 pm
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Lee was waiting until the flume sprung to life. He didn't have to wait long for the flume suddenly sprung to life and a girl who was about 14 to 16 years old. She had forgotten Cloral was full of water. The moment she fell into the water she started screaming that she could not swim. Lee jumped in and pulled the girl out of the water by here hand. The girl gasped for breath.
"So you must be from...... ah! Veelox" exclaimed Lee
"Yup" replied the girl
"Name's Lee. So hows lifelight?" Lee asked
"Still running" replied the girl grimly.
The next instant two other travelers fell out of the Flume into the water.
"Not again" i muttered as i jumped back in to get the other travelers.
"What? why are we in Cloral" asked one boy who appeared to be from Denduron
"Thats exactly why i called all the travelers. The Flumes are not working properly." Lee said and then added "name's Lee mates"
"Well Lee i am Bobby Pendragon and this is Jacob" said Bobby
"I'm Senna " said Senna
"Well Bobby's the leader. What should we do now?" asked Jacob
"first things first get these on" Lee said giving them some Cloral clothes.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 5:16 pm
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**Good luck with an idea. If anyone cant think of one don't let thi9s die just post that you cant get an idea and i will think of something. And i expect good writers like you to come up with an idea.**
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Are you Insane the same man asks, - "Oh yes!. The Mad Hatter being saner!"
  








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