Young Writers Society

Eos Zorina Altan
Eos .Z. Altan is a Warrior who hails from a planet called Zordaan. His head looks something like a Grey's and his eyes are large, oval...and red.
He has a heavy, muscular build, with broad shoulders. Millions of tiny spikes cover his arms.
He wears a helmet with a red crest, black leather armor, and a cape.
His weapons are two swords-one is blue colored and shaped like a crescent moon, the other is dagger shaped and red.
Personality wise, he is very intelligent and intuitive, though he does have a crazy streak (being an alien after all)

Margaret Kelly is a twenty five year old Olympic swimmer. She's won three gold medals and has begun to train for her third Olympics, which she's planning to be her last. Engaged to the love of her life, the two just bought a house in the mountains outside Denver. While he travelled for his work as a photojournalist over the Fourth of July, she invited her childhood friend Charlotte and her husband David to stay with her. The day before they arrived, Margaret found two people digging through her trash can outside of her house, looking for food. She invited them in. She liked the girl, blonde and a little sacred, but felt uneasy about the guy. Still, she let it go, and enjoyed her time with her friends on the Fourth of July. Until the scared blonde girl came back to haunt her.

Vil: A boy with strange, golden eyes. At first glance, he looks like he's around ten years old, but there's something about his face that says otherwise. He has short, messy black hair. The outfit he died in was a simple one: a black hoodie with purple trim, gray cargo pants, black combat boots, and a black t-shirt. The most notable part of the outfit would have to be the necklace of silver charms dangling around his neck - there's a total of fifteen.

Injury wise, he has all of the cuts and bruises you'd expect from a kid. One of them is a nasty gash across his right cheek, while the other is bruise around his left eye. The others are hidden underneath his clothes.

The only other major injury is a cut right through his abdomen. There is blood, but the more unusual part of the wound is how it looks like shadows/particles of darkness are trying to come off of it and the skin around it.

Oops, I totally missed the part where injuries manifest. I’ll edit my post. Because Margaret definitely would be covered in blood as she was stabbed to death. Consider her white nightgown stained red until I have the chance to edit my post. The worst of her injuries will be underneath her gown.

Also: do the injuries actually hurt in the afterlife? @Jaybird

@Elinor, I'd say they hurt, but the characters would only realize it if they interacted with the injury - like by poking it.

Emily: In appearance, she's a thirteen-year-old girl with waist-length light brown hair that's black at the roots, which can't really be seen beneath her wide-brimmed sunhat. Her skin is dark caramel in color and she's got a very distinct look about her, something historic in the way her bones are shaped. Her eyes, though they were once a lovely shade of dark brown, are tinted red along the edges of her iris. When she smiles, it's clear that her teeth are all sharper than should be natural, her canines especially being much longer than they should be.

She wears a light blue sundress over a long-sleeved green-and-purple striped shirt, gloves, and a pair of black leggings and knee-high purple boots. Everywhere they can be added there are frills and lace, including a big crocheted bow and a whole bunch of bright pink ribbon atop her hat, lace of the same color sewn around the collar, sleeves, and hem of her sundress and around the wrists of her gloves, along with a bundle of bows of all kinda and colors sewn in a cluster like a broach on her dress. She carries a purse slung over one shoulder that looks like it was created from an old floral rug, which has also been adorned with bows and ribbons everywhere she could think to put them.

There's a splotch of blood and a hole through her dress directly opposite the broach of bows that looks like some kind of spike was driven through her chest, but otherwise, the only injury not hidden beneath her clothes is a shallow cut along her throat and a few small cuts and bruises on her face. Literally every other inch of skin is covered.

It feels like a good time to mention that Emily can mess with the gravity around her person. It only reaches out a few inches, about a foot max if she's really focusing, so she can't do a whole lot more with it than stand on the walls and ceilings of everywhere she comes across, which is what she does.