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Thu Oct 21, 2010 10:41 pm
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



Donia
"Amnesty had a nightmare. It was about her past she's terrified that he's going to find her again." I repeated quietly rubbing my scars. "She refuses to let anyone in." I said still quiet still rubbing feeling the memory start to play in the back of my mind and I shook just a little bit.
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Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:40 pm
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Fri Oct 22, 2010 5:50 pm
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Calied

It wasn't Calied was responsible, in fact most of the time he just tried to show some respect towards others. But this case he was stricken with guilt, unable to even leave her bedside, he made sure she was lying face down, so she didn't choke on her vomit. As he slowly slipped into deeper panic, she finally woke up.

"Luckily the dose I gave you was relatively mild."

Rolling her eyes she muttered, "Mild my ass. Tell that to the messed up dreams I had."

He sighed, "I'm sorry okay. But the idea of cold turkey was worse."

Groaning she tried to stand up before holding her head, and falling back down.

"Don't try to get up. The drug liable to be in your system for at least 6 more hours.

Staring daggers at him he again sighed, "I could have done more monstrous things."

Without warning she leapt up before easing back down being reminded of the pain, "Hold on say that again?"

"Nevermind... Anyway, you should be fine now. I bet you want rid of me as soon as possible. So I shall say goodbye."
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You poor take courage
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This earth was made a common treasury
For everyone to share
All things in common
All people one
We come in peace
The orders came to cut them down

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Fri Oct 22, 2010 6:15 pm
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:43 pm
MilkNCookies says...



Sebastion bump.

"Who is going to find her again?" I asked Donia.

"Not now Sebastion. It's sort of private." I nodded at Donia's response as a cackly message same over the school speaker:

"Every person on lock down. Find the nearest shelter." I immediately sprinted into some room that Jasmine and I could barely fit in, wondering what the hell was going on.
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:01 pm
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Cleo:

The speaker crackled "Every person on lock down. Find the nearest shelter." Lazily, I walked over to the building closest to me. There wasn't really a need to run. When I got into the building I went to the nearest window and peered outside. What was going on?
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:17 pm
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Calied

What on earth was happening, she wasn't... it wasn't even conceivable, an angel whether fallen or not still had the good grace to avoid him. But the way she stared, it creeped out a sexual deviant, that was disturbing. Trying to muddle his way through his never-ending thoughts. He considered his next course as she switched between confusion to a new emotion, one that he made sure never surfaced in any of his victims.

He had known her as a kid it wasn't right.

Taking a step back, he watched as Cassiel flashed a glittering smile, stretching her wings out as if to reveal herself in all splendour. As he turned to check how far away from door he was, he spun around to see she moved closer.

"Uh, I'm sure many things going on here are rather confusing."

"Confusing not the word I'd use." she replied grinning.

"Ah..."

As his emotions went haywire so did his magic, as he began to switch between many visages, she giggled and moving closer whispered, "A incubus who nervous, how cute."

"...Yeah..."

Moving back again he tried to keep control of his glamour, but try as he might, he couldn't drop the impending dread in his stomach, no matter what way you put it, he was the least likely candidate in this dating game, he was made out of evil and was put on earth to cause pain.

Maybe she's a sadomasochist, he thought.

Just as he she moved closer his ears picked up the tannoy.

"Every person on lock down. Find the nearest shelter."

Watching her lose concentration on him, he took his chance and ran out, as fast as he could hearing her yell, "They didn't say where to find shelter, did they, come back!" as he kept running he heard her thoughts pierce him, "I'll keep you safe."

Gulping he burst into his room heart ablaze and fell against the door, slowly regaining control of his glamour.
You poor take courage
You rich take care
This earth was made a common treasury
For everyone to share
All things in common
All people one
We come in peace
The orders came to cut them down

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Sun Oct 24, 2010 11:25 pm
MilkNCookies says...



I'm sorry guys, but i didn't think this was moving in any direction very quickly. Excuse me for trying to keep it alive.
Last edited by MilkNCookies on Mon Oct 25, 2010 11:49 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Oct 25, 2010 3:32 am
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*blinks* Huh? What the hell is going on now? *is confused* Invasion? Devil messenger... WHAT?
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Mon Oct 25, 2010 3:32 am
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Okay, I think we should stop until this is sorted out. Someone gone off on a mad tangent that makes no sense in context so I think no one posted until she's sorted it, because trust me I ain't the only one confused by post above me, it makes no sense and seems highly convenient, because of this I suggest we begin a DT to avoid big plot changes like this, it's too big a change to be put in without people discussing it.
You poor take courage
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This earth was made a common treasury
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All things in common
All people one
We come in peace
The orders came to cut them down

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Mon Oct 25, 2010 12:44 pm
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I agree. Here is the DT:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic71112.html
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Mon Oct 25, 2010 5:21 pm
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



... Jeff.
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Tue Oct 26, 2010 2:06 pm
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* ON HOLD. *
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Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:00 pm
MilkNCookies says...



O.o WHY?!?!
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Thu Oct 28, 2010 1:52 am
fictionfanatic says...



I'm resigning from this. I wasn't really in it anyway, but I'm just to loaded up with homework and essays
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