z

Young Writers Society


Children of Gods



User avatar
180 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 771
Reviews: 180
Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:58 am
Cspr says...



((*has mortal; is bored because I was frozen*))
My SPD senses are tingling.
  





User avatar
324 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 15580
Reviews: 324
Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:10 pm
Threnody says...



but you're not frozen anymore!!
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~
  





User avatar
180 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 771
Reviews: 180
Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:24 pm
Cspr says...



((I'm not?))
My SPD senses are tingling.
  





User avatar
324 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 15580
Reviews: 324
Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:27 pm
Threnody says...



no!! :D
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~
  





User avatar
180 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 771
Reviews: 180
Sat Nov 27, 2010 5:02 pm
Cspr says...



((Interesting. I thought New York was frozen.))
My SPD senses are tingling.
  





User avatar
324 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 15580
Reviews: 324
Sat Nov 27, 2010 5:24 pm
Threnody says...



Well, if you read the last real post you will find that New York and the world is unfrozen
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~
  





User avatar
180 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 771
Reviews: 180
Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:22 pm
View Likes
Cspr says...



((Huh. Weird. I totally missed that even though I did read...well, it was last night...filling food makes the brain numb?))

K.J.:

Things to note: the guy who had handed me twenty bucks was gone, as was the random poof-into-existence-guy, and, well, things were just odd.

I was becoming my father, seeing things that weren't there.

Lovely.
My SPD senses are tingling.
  





User avatar
131 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 3558
Reviews: 131
Sun Nov 28, 2010 1:36 am
Sunshine says...



~Cecilia~

I hate Luke. So cocky and arrogant. Just like those stupid humans. Him and Cleo. Judith to. So the only ones I didn't really hate were John and Ellie. So Luke had even reduced me to swearing! I saved that for humans. And him. He had even made fun of my appearance! My cheeks reddened again. I was nice enough looking. I grimanced inwardly. Suddenly spotting the (one of) only gods I could stand.

" Oh my gosh! Ellie! There you are!"
I run up to her but not before I turn to John and Luke.
"Fix it right ok idiot?"
He gives me that sarcastic grin and I stick out my toungue. Turning back to Ellie I see a grin on her face.
"Just like old times, eh?"
"To much like old times," I mutter.
"We don't want another Earthquake do we?," Ellie laughs.
I realax. Ellie was ok. Plus she could make me laugh.
"Ah, let's hope not. I don't think the Earth could take it."
Her smiles fades.
"Is it bad?"
Ellie may be childlike, but she was a god.
"Yeah," I mutter.
"Waters to."
I feel a stab of pain and anger for my friend. Humans messed up everything!
"Anyway," I give her a hopeful smile," Do you know why were here?"
Ellie shrugged. I start playing with the grass.
"What have you been doing for the last sixty years?" Ellie asks.
"Made a couple Earthquakes. Hurt and helped some farmers. You?"
"Crap!" Ellie yelps.
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!
  





User avatar
131 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 3558
Reviews: 131
Sun Nov 28, 2010 2:02 am
Sunshine says...



Did I mention her dad was a spiritual guru? Yeah well It explains alot. Hoping K.J. is in Manhatten.Sorry Milk I did not see you earlier!


~Liliah~

I could feel all the aura of power. The so called Gods. They must be here! I saw an odd little group of people and walked toward them. The Aura grew stronger and stronger. This was it. A few weeks ago I had gotten a strange phone call in my Manhatten apartment. It told me to come and meet six gods. I stop dead in my tracks. I sensed no humans. Or mortals I guessed. Whatever. I searched for a human anywhere. I spy a man outside he was so not a god. I walk over to him.
"I'm Liliah. You?"
The boy, I see he's a boy now, looks at me like I'm crazy.
" I'm K.J."
The boy turns away.
"Your here for them aren't you?" I nodd my head toward the aura.
He looks at me like I'm an idiot.
"What?"
"Uh. Sorry."
I hated when I went all Sycho lady. But I knew he was lying to me.
"TELL. ME.THE.TRUTH."
Curse those Gods! They had me all on edge!
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!
  





User avatar
12 Reviews



Gender: Other
Points: 847
Reviews: 12
Mon Nov 29, 2010 1:55 am
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



Monica
I put in my headphones turning on Alesana. I walked through New York humming along. 'Home or no?' I asked myself. I turned off the street that would take me home and kept walking. 'Nah the plants can wait a bit longer.' I thought smiling to myself. I passed a few parked cars but so far I hadn't seen any driving which was odd. I turned into an intersection and was immediately bum rushed by over 100 people. 'So much for peace.' I thought to myself sighing and shaking my head. I put my hands in my jeans and walked along with the crowd hearing the familiar curses mutters and shouts at each other and into their phones. I turned again and then it got so much busier because it was Wall street of course I had to live just a few streets away from Wall Street I sighed again and shook my head. I closed my eyes and walked into someone and landed on the ground I landed on my butt and heard them say "I am so sorry." I waved it off and stood up. "It's fine." I said turning towards them. *Can be anyone.*
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."
  





User avatar
180 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 771
Reviews: 180
Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:14 am
Cspr says...



K.J.:

And then a new girl comes up to me, speaking nonsense. Yeah, New York had been a bad idea. Just as many crazies. "Wait, what...? Seriously, I don't know what you're talking about... I came here to make a fresh start is all." Why was I humoring her? Right, she could have a gun. It was always good to humor people who you didn't know well.
My SPD senses are tingling.
  





User avatar
49 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 922
Reviews: 49
Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:30 am
MilkNCookies says...



Cleo

I looked around the big city, wide-eyed. This was a lot different then the country I grew up on. I looked down at the paper.

485 SW, 384 TERRACE, ZIP: 55306 The scrap read. That was the address. I walked over, walking into someone.

"I'm so sorry!" I said quickly.

"It's fine." She said.

"Sorry, I wasn't looking. My bad. Anyways, do your know where this is?" I asked, showing her the paper.

"That doesn't exist." She explained.

"What?" I asked. "Well, thank you. My name is Cleo. You?"

*That's Monica, by the way*
"Fantasy is a way of looking through the wrong end of the telescope."

"The writer who breeds more words than he needs is making a chore for the reader who reads!"

~Dr.Seuss.
  





User avatar
12 Reviews



Gender: Other
Points: 847
Reviews: 12
Tue Nov 30, 2010 11:45 pm
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



Monica
"Names Monica." I said smiling. "Nice to meet you." He said holding out his hand. I shook it. " So who gave you the phony address?" I asked. He shook his head. "It's no big deal." He insisted. I looked at him tilting my head to the side. "You sure?" I asked. "Absolutely." He said firmly. I sighed and shook my head. "If it was me I'd find the person and beat the tar out of them." I said calmly. "A little violent are we?" He asked. I nodded smiling slightly. "So anyway what's the address for?" I asked my curiosity getting the best of me. He didn't answer and I rocked back and forth on my foot from the balls of my feet to my heels over and over again. I started to hum to to break the silence bored out of my mind still rocking.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."
  





User avatar
131 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 3558
Reviews: 131
Fri Dec 03, 2010 12:50 am
Sunshine says...



Um I'm a little confused with Cspr's last poat but will do what I can.

~Lilia~

"Ugh, whatever."
I didn't have any time to deal with culturless idiots. Looking him over I cringe. Or BOYS. He snorts.
"Goodbye."
I didn't need him. Or anyone. I walk over towards the group of people , who were strangley compelling. I feel a touch on my shoulder.
"Don't do it. I'd be stupid."
I whirl around.
"I HAVE to."
I sounded like a crazy. Giving him a sweet bubley smile I try again,
"I'll be fine."
The boy looked like he was struggling with a desision. I break away and walk towards the group. I fix my eyes on the blond woman that had an ocean aura. I loved oceans. I suddenly ran into a woman older and with a dark aura.
"I'm so sorry!'
That's Judith!
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!
  





User avatar
49 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 922
Reviews: 49
Fri Dec 03, 2010 12:55 am
MilkNCookies says...



Cleo


"Death in the family." I mumbled. She seemed not to hear me.She started to hum a tune.

"Mozart, Theme from Symphony number 9?" I asked her.

'Yes. How do you know?"

"I'd know my Mozart anywhere." I replied with a grin. She laughed. "Do you live here?" I asked her.
"Fantasy is a way of looking through the wrong end of the telescope."

"The writer who breeds more words than he needs is making a chore for the reader who reads!"

~Dr.Seuss.
  








Whenever you find you are on the side of the majority, it is time to pause and reflect.
— Mark Twain