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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:17 pm
Rydia says...



Sir Samuel needs to be with them - Jules' character.
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:30 pm
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(True, but that's it right. Small party I think. Any way to many went bad. =( Oh well. Still, where is everyone else?
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:47 am
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Arecks group dashed through the halls as silent as they could. With the exception of the screamind woman across Kera's back. Areck was formulating a strategy to get out in his mind. There was another way. They just had to get there before getting killed.
"One story down! Open window! We'll rappel down the side!" Areck shouted among the foot steps. Sounds of fighting could be heard behind them. The group came across a staircase. They trampled down the fastest a person could move. When they reached the bottom, a long hall was between them and their escape. They began to run. A group pf soldiers put themselves in the way, but Almen made short work of them with his wind.
"So, I was thinking, I've always wanted to ride a TaunTaun."
"Ummmm....I asked you answer the math problem on the board."
"No you didn't."
"Yes I did."
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 4:02 am
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(I'll make a second character, but if sasquash doesn't like it I'll delete him.)

Name- Samuel Testin

Appearance- http://gemiange.deviantart.com/art/FFT- ... a-41035055 the blond

Alliance- Princes Royal Guard

Class- Lancer

Weapon- Spear
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 11:36 pm
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(Where is everybody?)
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Sat Nov 24, 2007 12:10 am
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Kera watched Azerck rapple down and she grabbed the rope with her gloved hand. "Hold on, Princess, if you fall you'll still have to keep up hurt or not." She hissed. She slowly rapled down as the princess held on tight not daring look down. When her feet touched the ground she jerked away and Kera was knocked off her feet. Azerck grabbed her arm though.

"Let's go!" He yelled up to the others. "Don't let her go." He said shoving hte princess towards Kera. Kera glared at him. Who did he think he was, yes his group had saved her but that didn't mean she was apart of his group. They hadn't invited her or said anything of course she shouldn't have expected them to sense they hadn't had time. Her side throbbed where the arrow had glazed her but she ignored it and waited for another command.
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Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:06 am
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*Pie man, which one is blond?The one in the armor?Cause i hope so if your my royal guard!lol. Its fine with me if you have 2 profiles, but no more than that please.*
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Sat Nov 24, 2007 2:43 pm
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They both are. They look look diferent right?
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Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:16 pm
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Yeah, they do, so dont worry about it. You can stick him in when you want to.
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Jane

Outside in the chilly air, we set off again and my heart sank as I watched my home recede into the difference. I began to struggle again but Kera was obviously at the end of her patience and she hit me hard in the back, causing the breath to escape from my body.

"Don't even think about trying that again."

"You know, you could get a good ransome for me and you don't owe this group anything," I hissed. She faltered and actually seemed to be considering my proposition before hurrying on after the others.

"Aid the prince? I don't think so, not after being thrown in that cell."
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