Young Writers Society

Jacob
Cloral

"Hala?" I asked. "What..." Then the ring shone and I saw the letter floating towards it. Just before it disappeared, Spader shouted, "Second Earth!"

The letter vanished, but to what territory we didn't know.

Lee
Veelox




They walked through the numorous halls untill they reached a door.
"welcome to Veelox" said Aja as they entered, sitting on a chair
"no time for chit chat just tell us wher the second flume is and we will be going on our way" said Arreanda who was now getting impationt
"sure.......as soon as i find it myself" replied Aja
"great so you dont know where he other flume is. Now what do we do?" asked Lee
"We could ask someone like Press's acolyte" replied Senna

Uh, I have no idea where this is going, so I'm going to wait for another post...

*I'll join this SB, because I read the books*

Name: Iratyl
Gender: Male
Territory: Eelong
Race: Klee *The Kitty People*
Age: 20
Acolyte: Iyt (Close friend of Iratyl)
Weapons: Any type of Klee weapon.
Bio: Found out that he was a Traveller recently and quickly had his friend made Acolyte. Has only been to Coral which he did not like because it was too wet.
Appearance: Black fur, emerald eye, and wears forest green clothing. Keeps tang knife nearby.

Yay! I love klees... except for Saint Dane and his cats, they are just not nice.

Jacob
Cloral

"Well, that's great. But how does this help us?"

Spader paced slwoly, thinking. "I don't know as it exactly solves our problem... Maybe we could send a message to another territory."

"How would that help? The flume doesn't work, remember?"

"You're right. Come on, we should find the others." He dove into the water again. I sighed and followed. It looked like this adventure was all wet.

Iratyl
Eelong

Iratyl stepped out of the flume and shook the water out of his fur. "I'm never going to Cloral again," he said to no one in paticular. "Might as well try Veelox." He stepped up to the flume again and shouted, "Veelox!" and the pull of the flume took him in and he was off to the Territory of Veelox.

Iratyl
Veelox
"Who goes there," said a giant floating head outside the flume in Veelox.

"Iratyl, the new Traveler to Eelong."

Jacob
Cloral

We rode in silence for a while. It's not that there wasn't anything to say; I just didn't know where to begin.

Finally Spader said, "Maybe, when we tell the others, we can try the same thing with the flumes."

I grunted in reply.

"What's with you? You look like you've seen the ghost of Saint Dane."

I had to smile at that. "Don't I wish."

*sorry i wont be able to post a lot because i have to study for a big exam.**


Lee
Veelox




"Or we could just use some of the hover crafts and fly throught Veelox letting our rings do the searching for us" said Lee
"The second suggestion is good" said Senna
"Sure, follow me" said Aja and run down a hall
The others followed her until they came to a room full of things that looked like something made of metal in a shape of a diamond.
"So how do we use these things?" asked Arreanda

Iratyl
Veelox

"I have things under control here with another Traveller," said the head. She then dissapeared.

Jeez, thought Iratyl, bossy much? So he stepped into the flume again and even though it pained him too, he decided he'd go back to Cloral. "Cloral," he said into the flume with unenthusiastic voice and was sucked in waiting to get soaked.

Iratyl
Cloral
Suddenly, splash down, into water and Iratyl was not happy about it. he swam to the shore and shook as much water out of his fur as he could. "Damn water," he said under his breath.

Jacob
Cloral

We finally made to one of Cloral's floating cities. I looked around and was disappointed not to see any other Travelers.

"Has anyone seen Bobby Pendragon?" I hollered.

"No," an old man grunted. "Get along, boy."

Spader groaned. "This is great," he muttered. "How do we the others now?"

I shrugged.

We wandered the streets without much hope. Then I saw a familiar face and called, "Senna, ist that you?"

The gilr turned to face me. It wasn't Senna after all.

*Can someone help introduce me. I'm on Cloral right now. I don't want to keep going between each Territory.*

*That i cant do. Ask someone who's character is in cloral**


"easy, Just climb on them and then say start and then lean to the opposite side of where you want to go. Watch" said Aja and jumped onto aone of the 'things'.
She then said start and the 'thing' flew forward. Aja ajusted the sped by leaning her body forward or backwards and when she wanted to turn left she leaned right, to the right she leaned left.
"Oh thats how you do it" said Lee and followed her lead by jumping onto another one.
The instant he said start the 'thing' flew forwards at high speed. Before Lee could do anything he crashed into another pile of them.
"I think he needs to get more practice" said Senna

*Sorry , I kinda got lost, Ash, I'd get you in, but I don't know how unless I moved you, go find Jacob, then you both find us . *

Senna
Veelox

"Ok, y'all need a crash course in these things, there simple." Senna smiled jumping in one. "Just be gentle." She moved it around picking up speed and slowing down turning this was and that. "You don't want jerky movements." She smiled at Aja. She lifted hers back off the ground and the others followed. *Where are we going???*

Arreanda
Veelox

"That looks easy!" Arreanda exclaimed while skipping over towards the vehicle.
As she brought her leg over the vehicle, she tripped over... she tripped. This caused her to fall forward and run full speed into a wall.
"Ow! That hurt, as in, more painful then my last game of Clown Forest." She whined.
Aja gave her a troubled look "Is she okay?" she whispered to Lee.
"Okay, yes. Sane, no. She's from Quillan, where they kill each other for fun." He replied with a disgusted look.
"Oh," Aja mumbled.