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Thu Dec 08, 2005 5:25 am
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It was Rose she was dressed in a minature ball gown.
"Daddy i don't mind who you go with, as long as your happy."
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
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Thu Dec 08, 2005 5:29 am
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"whatever gave you the sort of idea I planned to go with..." but he was stopped for right infront of him stood Amy. In a red dress, reacing the floor and trailing behind her. Tied around her wasit was a golden sash and her hair was fashioned upwards.
"H-h-h-HI Amy! Thank you for escorting my daughter here..."
They both blushed.


Aurora sat at the table... watiting, tapping her foot, twiddling her fingers. Why was she so nervous? All she had to do was get married to Caleb? Something was wrong, she could feel it, one guest in the room wasn't meant to be there....

And from the far end of a table was an extemely large man.

(BTW he's gluttony, sin number 1)
  





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Thu Dec 08, 2005 5:37 am
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Slickunus Upter sat at the table, he was eating Caleb out of House and Home.
"Waiter get me some more prime vesesion and some Roast Chicken"
The Waiter sighed this guy had already caused them to ordere more food.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
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Thu Dec 08, 2005 5:40 am
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the commotion caused by Slickunus caused Marko to turn...
"--- THERE HE IS! Guards sieze him!"
Marko ran from Amy's eyes and headed with a sword drawn to the spirit that hosted Gluttony.

"We know who you are... hand over your power and leave in peace, or we'll take it by force!"
  





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Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:10 am
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Slickunus stood an sneered "So Caleb you think i came without guards, god you are dim;Guard get this party started."
Aurora was in her wedding dress and was crying "Why can't they just let us be happy she shiffled.
Marko an Amy had gone into the hall an were kissing, when the door burst open and out came a man with two handed sword Marko drew his sword.

"My name is your death you need not know more replied the stranger."
"Amy run i will hold him off shouted Marko putting his helm on"
"I'm noble so if you want to die, if i defeat you i will let you, i believe in Honor so we will fight a fair fight."
"Why you work for someone like this if you believe in honore."
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
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Thu Dec 08, 2005 7:36 pm
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This angered him, and he lunged at Marko as Amy ran.


Amy didn't know where to run, her liong gown was forcing her to run slowly, so she began to rip the ruffles off the skirt and go for help.


There was mass chaos in the ballroom. A miniture battle had broken out, with nobelmen tossing their hands about and ladies of the court bashing others in the head with wine bottles. Aurora picked up a long metal rod that was in the basket near the giant fireplace.
"YOU RUINED MY WEDDING! HEYYY-AAAH" She swung the sword and knocked an enemy in the head, causing him to knock out. Caleb stared at her in wonder. "Remind me to never make you angry!"
While this was going on Gluttony sat there, dodging blows and picking up all the food he could in the process.
  





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Fri Dec 09, 2005 11:22 am
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Marko swung his sword at this unknown enemy, he fell down uncoisios
Marko looked at the guy and tied him up with some rope he found.

Slikunus was just leaving when he Caleb saw rushing at him with cold fury in his eyes "you beast ruin my wedding so i'll ruin you."
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
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Fri Dec 09, 2005 9:27 pm
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Slikunus turned to face Caleb. He was enormus. He was shorter than Caleb though, but it was no competition to see that maybe he was wider than Caleb was tall. His black eyes squinted over at Caleb.

"Why should I give my my Sin? You want to take it to wish away Eriera don't you?! Well no, I intend to find the other sins and the virtues... I already have this..." He held up a blood red stone. Engraved were strange markings, but Claeb knew this was the stone of Lust. It was Repusto's stone.

"Hand it over now Slikunus and you may go in peace!"
  





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Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:17 am
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"Caleb you must think i'm a idiot, i'm not going to give up he sneered"

"Well die then bawled Caleb lunging his sword at Slickunus."

Slickunus drew his own sword and blocked Caleb assult.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
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Sat Dec 10, 2005 9:19 pm
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The stone he held fell to the floor and Caleb made a pass for it but Silkunus thrust the sword and cut him off. the blade had scaratched Caleb over the eyebrow and he was bleeding.

Marko kept a close guard ont he man before he locked him into an enclosed room with no windows and went to find Amy and Caleb.

Aurora was bashing men in the head. They kept sneering and looking oddly at her. "TAKE THIS YOU PERVERT!" As she whamemd the metal casing into their skulls.

Amy and Rose as well as a large crowd were outside. Weeping Amy worried about Marko and Rose about everything.

Caleb stood up, wiped off te bloody and thrust his sword at Slikunus, scratching his arm. And here they kept scratchign each another with their blades.
  





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Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:56 am
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Caleb starting pushing slickunus back with with his blade until he was at the wall.
Then he held the below chin.
"Surrender Slickunus we beat you, so leave drop yours stones."
Slickunus had cold sweat going down his face he stammered "O...k he..re t..ake it."
Slickunus dropped the stones and ran out, including Pride a Royal Blue stone with a gond band circled around it.

Just then Marko ran over to Caleb, "Thier another sin that was with him, i tied him."

When Marko, Amy,Aurora and Caleb came to where marko and Amy saw the enemy "he's gone,, i tied him up well how he escape confusenly pondered."

They saw a note it said I am Anger and i rarely forget someone who beats me, we will meet again Marko i'm sure of it.
Signed Teron Gyuop.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
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Sun Dec 11, 2005 7:27 pm
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They stared at the letter in a moment of silence.
"He'll be back," Marko said as he crumpled up the note. "I'm pretty sure he is anger, he attacked me and Amy while we were....-- for no reason at all I mean." AMy and Marko blushed furiously as Caleb and Aurora began to laugh.

Then Aurora started to cry.
"They ruined my wedding dress!!!"
  





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Mon Dec 12, 2005 8:02 am
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Meanwhile

Teron Gyuop had only managed to escape he had a splitting head ache from getting hit with the face of the blade, but apart from that he wanted revenge on Marko. He looked at himself he had short black hair bright blue eyes and had a stong build he was wearing red slintmail and iron gauntlets.

He had the meeting with the other sins and it was about their success while they only had one, Caleb and his subjects had three they only had it thanks to Bane who took King Ganan stone and gave it too us, oh how he missed Bane.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]
  





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Mon Dec 12, 2005 7:09 pm
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"Do you know if they are aware they they too carry some of the virtures we hope to posess as well?" Asked Clysintia Morfta, the sin of vanity. She held out a mirror to herself and began to fix her hair.

"I am unsure of this... if they do, hoever, do not know they possess the talents... then we shall TAKE THEM!" Everybody surrounding the table laughed. "I will go back at dawn!"


Aurora and the group headed out to the castle's ballroom, where the mess was in the process of cleaning up. "We know of the sins... and they are after us... yet, what of the virtues?"
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2005 5:54 am
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"Yeah i wonder Caleb maybe we are te virtues, just a thought.
"I don't know marko, but i'm we will find out."
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]
  








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