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Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:16 am
Firestalker says...



**Well that was unexpecting**

**You wrote that perfectly. So perfect that i have nothing to write**
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Sat Sep 08, 2007 8:41 pm
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"Duck!" Tave and Tas leapt to the ground as the monster lunged towards them, narrowly missing Tas' feet.

"What the hell do we do now?" Tas shouted at Tave.

"Umm, RUN!"

~SishBee~
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Sun Sep 09, 2007 12:24 pm
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**Come on people don't let this die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sun Sep 09, 2007 4:07 pm
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Sorry. I was gone for the weekend.
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Tas took off, Tave following close behind. They dodged trees, jumped over roots and twigs, but the monster still gained.

"What do we do?" Tas shouted over his shoulder, dodging another moss covered tree.


*Sorry. Thats all i've got*
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Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:49 pm
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Sorry I haven't posted in a few days! Busy week...

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After our talk with the Mystics, Zade was in a foul mood. But we all agreed that we should be off to Liua as soon as possible. The next day, we brought the ship into the docks and announced our new destination to the crew. We didn't tell them about the necklace; we didn't trust them. There was a bit of a mixed reaction.

"Well," said Jly, "off to Liua, then."

"Not so fast, there," one sailor yelled. "I didn't sign up for a wild goose chase off to the far North with a no-show captain."

A murmur of general agreement rippled throughout the crew.

As time wore on, it became obvious that most of them were unwilling to make the trip with us. In the end, only Jly, Xian, and two others stayed. All the others gathered their things and left. As one of the sailors disembarked, I overheard him mutter:

"Bad luck to have a woman aboard."

I punched him in the face.

"Bad luck for you, anyway," I said.

The man walked down the gangplank with a bloody nose.

When the rest had gone, the seven of us who remained met together in the captain's quarters.

"We're going to need a bigger crew," one of the two sailors stated.

Zade swore. "I know."

"It shouldn't be too difficult to hire some people," the other sailor said. "We have a good amount of money in the hold."

"We'll also be needing supplies," said Jly.

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hehe, I've been wanting Allynne to give someone a nosebleed since we started. I'm happy now! :twisted:

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Fri Sep 14, 2007 12:49 am
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Come ON, People! Don't let this die!!!!!!!!!! It's to good to let it die! Come onnnnnnn!!!! Someone Post! Get us out of the necklace! Gah!

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Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:17 pm
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Tave and Tas ran through the jungle. Suddenly they both tripped at exactly the same time.

Tas looked up first. "What the hell is wrong with this necklace?"

They were stood on a rock in the middle of white-water rapids.

~SishBee~
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Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:25 am
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Zade




"Well first we have to find some supplies and then some more crew. But how in the world are we going to find a crew who would be willing to sail a pirate ship with no captain??" asked Jly
"Good point" I muttered angrily
"Whats with you" asked Drew
I sneered at him and turned away.
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 9:10 pm
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COME ON! DONT LET THIS DIE!!!!! please. :smt085 :smt087 :smt088 :smt089 :smt090 :smt010
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 11:48 am
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Tave hated water. She practically leapt into Tas' arms and started shaking.

"What the hell?" said Tas.

"Water! I hate water!" Tave was clinging to Tas for dear life.

"Can you swim?"

Tave nodded slowly, "A little, but there is no way I am going in there!"

"Ok. Can you fly us both to safety then?"

Again Tave nodded and slowly let go of Tas. "Get on my back, DON'T touch the wings!"

Tas climbed gingerly onto here back. As they took off, the river dropped sharply away, and a mountain sprung up out of the ground.

"Again I ask, WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THIS NECKLACE!?"

Tave shurgged and pushed Tas off her back.

~SishBee~
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