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Burning Rejection



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Wed Apr 25, 2018 2:42 pm
Bellarke says...



"It isnt the end of the world. It is all the way across the apartment. You dont have to deal with me." I roll my eyes.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 2:59 pm
fatherfig says...



"Actualy your pretty cool I am just nervous because I have never met your brother..." I look up at her.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:03 pm
Bellarke says...



I look at the floor board of the car. "You cant anyway. He died."

I feel tears prickle the back of my eyes, like needles poking me.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:13 pm
fatherfig says...



I let my face contain sadness though instead I feel jealousy,"Oh, I.. I am sorry..."
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:18 pm
Bellarke says...



"Well... at least now I have someone to talk to. Someone who will actually listen to me instead of do what Zain and Blake just did."
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:27 pm
fatherfig says...



"Well I am glad you enjoy my company my father and brother never understood me..." there is to much truth to those words I almost choke letting them out...
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:36 pm
Bellarke says...



"Ahh. I think all families are-" Sh stops. "What the hell is that in the road?"

I point to a shadow of a large man in the road. He has shaggy hair around his face. "Should I help em?"
Last edited by Bellarke on Wed Apr 25, 2018 4:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 4:16 pm
fatherfig says...



I squint to see him more clearly,"Shit!" I duck down in the floor board,"Just keep driving... well drive a little closer so I can get a better look and then I will tell you.... I guess.... I just dont want it to be dad..... He didn't want me to come..." I just don't want it to be Thor or any one else come to take me to hela... as a truce..
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 4:50 pm
Bellarke says...



"O..kay...." I say, driving by a little faster. "Hey that guy looks like Chris Hemsworth."

((See what I did there??? XD))
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 4:53 pm
fatherfig says...



"Then k-keep d-driving..", I stutter flashing her pleading looks...
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 4:55 pm
Bellarke says...



"What? Why? Your acting weird. What if he needs help?" I slow the car down alittle bit, and slowly come to a stop. "Stay in the car if you want. If I get mugged, I get mugged."
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 4:57 pm
fatherfig says...



"NO!!", I frown panicked
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 5:00 pm
fatherfig says...



"I know him he is dangerous stay away...", I know this isn't going any where so I do it I turn into Loki crouching in the floor boards, "Just keep driving..."
Last edited by fatherfig on Wed Apr 25, 2018 5:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 5:08 pm
Bellarke says...



"What the....." I slowly move closer to the door, eyeing him.....
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 5:14 pm
fatherfig says...



I do what anyone would do in this situation,"Shut up and drive!"
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig








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