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Nayeli~

Nayeli let out a tight laugh and shook her head. Nanook began to growl again, stepping closer to her. "For me to come to your village, that's suicide," Nayeli looked down at Nanook, who held his spot. Stupid, stupid, stupid. It was stupid of me to even let you come to this territory right after the war with them. Nanook snarled mentally.

Oh hush up. We'll make it out in a minute. Besides, I might even have fun for once. Nayeli smiled at Nanook, then back at Lance.

"And why would it be suicide?" Nayeli acted as though she was pondering over the question.

"It just would be. When you get back to your tribe tell them you met me, Nayeli Nuta," It seemed as though realization flashed across Lance's face for a brief moment, "in the forest and then see what they say. I would kill to see their faces, but sadly, I must get out of here before I, myself, am killed. It was nice meeting you, Lance." With that she bowed and shifted into her dog form, jetting through the forest. And you said we would get away. She barked in a laugh, only to be glared at. She snickered and continued running.

*Bleh... sorry couldn't think of anything. She'll give in eventually**




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im really lost, please can someone help me.... and read my last post
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She sits on the grass watching the flowers sway in the wind. The horses run up to the two guys watching.

"i dont no them" she thought.

she walks up to them,

"beautiful arnt they" Pandora says as she stands next to the closest one of the two men, Marshall.
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Marshall looked at the girl and nodded. "Very, I want to see if Adahy can really get this bay settled down. She'll be tough."

"Why?" The girl asked looking at the bay.

"Look at her eyes, she hasn't once showed the whites of them, which means she isn't scared. That means that she isn't afraid of us and will hurt us with a straight mind." He smiled back. "Boy that'll be one horse when she is ridable."
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Pandora giggled,

"yeah she will" she said as she looked into his eyes,

There was something about them, they were simialar in some way.

Then she had a flash back,

'The strong horse riding towards her, in wolf form. The glowing eyes'

She held her head after she saw this.

"are you ok Pandora?" he asks her
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shay **sorry it took me forever to post >_< cray weekened**

I looked around for anything, anything that would make me feel better, but it seemed that nothing could. I climbed up on some rocks that was very high, I could see the enitre camp ground and I was close to a water fall. I looked down and took a deep breath as mist filled my nostrils.


**sorry**
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*sorry so short, dont no what to put*

As Eric watched the crows he saw in the corner of his eye. A beutiful young women.

"My lady, would you like to join me! he shouted up the cliff.
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Shay

My eyes flew open and I stumbled a bit, I had never known another person to know where I was let alone up here. I looked around not seeing aanyone.

"Do you mind showing yourself?" I asked
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***HEy, guys, try and keep your posts long. Writing one sentence and then hitting enter twice doesn't mean it's long, make it long and meaty if that makes sense.***
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Otay...I'm offically lost and confused. DId Paramore ever post..or the other girl TN? Ahhhhh! This is irritating....I'll just start off where I can.

Adahy:

Adahy sighed as he rubbed the horses neck. He'd have to think of a name for her.

"What would you like me to call you, pretty girl?" she snorted at the name he called her, makign him chuckle. "Guess not that one."

"Lets see...Mihie? No...Liliiek?" Seh snorted at that one. "Liliiek? It doesn't sound like it suits you. How bout Lilie? Or Lillian? You look like a lily. Beautiful. " She whinnied, trying to get up. Tossing her head, she ran arounf the en in circles.

"Well, I guess it's Lillian." he chuckled when she whinnnied.



Chepi:

After it started to get dark, she headed back to tehh tribe. Seh nearly cried out when she stumbled into someone. She could tell it was a man, but she didn't know who, so she screamed and ran back to the oak. Jumping, she quickly launched herself onto the lowest branch pulling herself up, and wrapping her arms around her knees. A soft chuckle came from below her. Recognizing who it was she let out a hiss.

"Out of all the inconsiderable things to do..." she dropped to the ground silently, walking up to the intruder, prepared to slap himin the face. Marshall held up his hands in defeat.

"What are you doing here?" he asked, chuckling again.

"What does it matter to you?" heat rushed to her cheeks. "I like to come out here, for the quiet. Now if you will I'll be leaving." she started to walk past him but he grabbed her arm, restraining her. Seh turned to look at him.
"Hello, is this thing on?"




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****Basically I made another guy named Lance for Chup, they met and that was all the posts that we put in. Also, Marshall met Paramore, who now has a different name, girl and I can make you another one. But not mach happened at all. :P Do you not have internet at home?****

Lillian eyed the man from where she had stopped waiting to see what he would do next. He had guessed her name, that much was good. He just watched her run around, being gentle whenever she did let him near her. She wanted to get out and run. She wouldn't care if someone was on her back just as long as she could run.

You'd throw them off and you know it. Black laughed at her.

So, doesn't matter, if I want to be free I'll be free! She replied. They can't tell me what to do.

IN horse form they sure can, course, you won't shift while they are around. He laughed

If I can even shift at all. She sighed.

Marshall:

"You can't be out in the woods on your own, Chepi." He said softly. "Come on, we got some new horses and I think your brother wants you to see them." He led her through the woods towards the village, she wasn't to happy about him having seen her.

"Why does he want me to see them?" She demadned.

"He didn't tell me if he did or not, I just said he probably would." He shrugged. "Plus, I've heard him say you need a new horse and there are some beautiful ones in thsi bunch."
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*okay, i have to go, so i can't post right now, but i will tommorrow.*
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**Speaking of Lance and Nayeli for a moment... where are they again? <--- to lazy to look back**
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Chepi:


"Whatever." she murmered to herself, but let out a gasp as she seen teh black stallion running around. Seh reachd out her hand until she heard MArshall chuckle behind her. She snatched it back automatically.


Adahy:

He smiled as she calmed down. "See that wasn't so bad." He murmured, his face in her neck. Seh shinnied like he tickled him. "Now how bout we try and get this on you." he gestured to the mouth peice. She went wild, bucking. He ran to the edge and jumped up on the logs. "Okay, okay." He said when she calmed down. "We won't try that right now." She whinnied again, not liking it. He carfully jumped down of teh post, and walked towards her. Seh put her heah in his hands, whinning. "It's okay girl." he said, rubbing his hand on her neck.
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Marshall:

"That one and the bay will just as soon bite your hand off." He smiled.

"Bay?" She asked looking at him quickly.

"Yup, the one your brother is working with. Come on, I"ll show you. She's a beauty." He smiled.


Lillian:

Lillian wanted to growl at him. No, it's not ok. I can't wait until night fall when I can shift to my human form.

It'll be very painful. Black warned.

I don't care. She hissed back. Ya, he's nice and all. But I don't like this. He wont' put that bite in my mouth!

If you want to run you'll have to let him.

**Hey, so when she changes it will be at night. She's probably scream cause it will be so painful. Maybe he can hear her and come out. It'd be cool. :P**
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