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Lizzy opened her eyes. She was in a room, and the weird thing was she could see- from both eyes. This time the mechanic's robotic eye had worked and is functioning just like a regular human eye.

Lizzy crawled towards the wall and used it to get herself up. She closed her eyes and opened them again.
What?" She whispered.

Lizzy was in line for food in the cafeteria and out of the room. Had she blacked out again. This was too weird for her.




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Lucan

Rage.

That was all there was.

Rage from being strapped down and tormented day after day, a rage so strong, it would tear me apart sooner or later.

I sighed as I lay there. When would they be back? What would thes try on me this time? More shocks? More injections? More lasers? More sound waves? More physical pain? I knew their ways too well, now...

Just wait until I'm free. That's all I can do. Then all hell will break loose.

I kept staring at the ceiling even after the scientists walked back in. I bit my tongue as they resumed their inhumane "treatments."

Then I was alone.

Had I passed out?

Apparently.
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Trinity-

Trinity closed her eyes as pain shot through her body again. She wouldn't scream, no way would she give them the pleasure of hearing her scream. Tears threatened at her eyelids as the stupid machanic tore into her arm again. It was bad enough that when they got her they wrecked the car she was in and made her right arm useless, now they were proading and poking at it hoping their fifth gadget would make it work again. All she knew was they were putting metal and screws and wires in it with out numbing the pain. She had passed out once, but she fought that too. The less they had control of her emtions and just plain her the better.

"The boss said put those ear drums in her too. He wants to see if they will work." A high pitched voice said, she heard the machanic grunt and then dig into her arm again. Pain flew through her body and she passed out again.



When she woke up her arm didn't hurt any more, but her ears throbbed. She felt one of them, they felt normal, but she could hear voices outside of her room. But it is sound proff The thought scared her. She looked down at her arm, it looked like it had before the wreck. She couldn't stop staring at it. The arm worked. She moved it around and opened and closed her hand, IT WORKED. She punched the wall to see how well it worked. She froze, there was a dent in the wall!
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Can I join!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!
What the F David Blain!
CHEEZE ITS CHEEZE ITS!
Evan! David Blain enlarged the car while I was still holding it!
Im effing Five Foot Ace of Spades!
Get out of my house you back to the future demon ass!




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Gabriel-

I was glad it wasn't me. I pitied the innocents. Hated those who inflicted the pain. And yet i was considered one of them. All because i wore the white coat.

Wincing as i passed the chambers of screaming, whimpering 'patients' i followed closely behind a woman scientist, making our way to retrieve yet another one for 'treatment'.

I'll find some way to help them... I vowed to myself, my hands unconsciously clenching into fists. I won't let them become some freak experiment. Nor will i allow them to become brainless zombies like the rest of the world. Not while i can help it.

But i wasn't one to jump head-first into something like this. So i waited until the opportune moment came along... a moment when there would be no doubt in success.

First, though, came gaining trust from both sides.

This wasn't going to be easy. Especially while i wore the white coat and my eyes still held the look of defiant freedom.

But it was well worth the shot.
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Can I call Gabriel or has he already been taken??

Name: Leah Alba

age: 20

height: 5' 6"

Hair: dark brown

eyes: she is blind but they are a hazed over blue.

physique: thin, muscular, very defined facial features, tan complection

personality: optimistic, quiet but not shy, smart, cunning, funny, witty

history: was going to college in Florida until it all happened, she had a seeing eye dog named Mandy
Last edited by HollieWood on Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
What the F David Blain!
CHEEZE ITS CHEEZE ITS!
Evan! David Blain enlarged the car while I was still holding it!
Im effing Five Foot Ace of Spades!
Get out of my house you back to the future demon ass!




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Lizzy stayed in the long line, all of the people were patients. Young and old and of all races- it didn't matter who.

"What are these black outs?" Lizzy wondered.

In the distance you could hear the cries and screams of the patients.




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Receria~

Receria walked into the cafeteria with a smile, that never faded. She grabbed a plate and squeezed her way through all the people and up to Lizzy. The others wouldn't mind if she 'cut in front'. They where all going ot the same place anyway.

"Ello Lizzy." She said a lilt in her voice. Lizzy looked around nervously.
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Hollie>> Sorry, Gabriel has been claimed by Bella's character, and so i ask you to edit your previous post slightly so that it fits with the plot line better. And i also ask you to please space out your paragraphs. I understand you're new, but big clumps like that are a bit hard on the eyes.

Thanks, and sorry again!

-Mays
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Lizzy gave Receria a nervous look. She didn't like surprises.

"What is it?" The brown haired 14 year old girl asked Lizzy.

"I..I don't know why but I am having black outs. One minuet I was somewhere else and now I am here... its like when every I close my eyes." Lizzy informed her.

Receria shrugged- she had no clue. Lizzy so foolishly shut her eyes.


"wake up.....wake up...." A voice told her.

Lizzy opened her eyes to an empty room. She was lying in a bed, an ivy in her arm. The green dye haired girl sat up. She could move freely.

"I'm not medicated..." She realized.

The door was opened. She could get away.

"I have to save the other patients..." She murmured.



Lizzy ran, towards the gas chambers. Something lead her there, and it was right. The scientists were ready to kill all of the patients. Lizzy held a needle from the IV. She was ready to kill anything in her way. But when she entered there were no guards.

"Everyone!!! Listen we have to escape now! Follow me!!!" Lizzy yelled.

All the patients were quiet. Behind Lizzy was all of the guards, holding their guns,
Lizzy's heart pounded, but for some strange reason she inhaled lots of air.

Unknown to her- the scientists had replaced her lungs with fire proof metal ones, filled with helium, and had a sparker in them. They had fire proofed her completely. They gave her the gift of fire. Code name 'The Dragon'.


When the green haired girl exhaled a huge breath of fire came from her mouth and melted the guards.

Everyone just stared." wwwhat am i?" She wondered..



*hurray the escape begins!!!*




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Is there a DT for this? I don't want to join but I want to watch the storyline..
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Lucan

When I came to, I was alone. My head felt as if it had been split open, the headache was so intense, but I only noticed it for a moment.

They had left me alone, and unbound!

How stupid could these scientists be? Weren't they aware of my rage, my deadly drive?

I would begin my revolt tonight.

That was absolute.

I made my way towards the cafeteria, headache taking over again.
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Before:

Lizzy lied on the table, fast asleep. Her chest cut open. The scientists were taking out her lungs and replacing them with metal ones. And fire proofing her throats and all of her body.

A scientist was talking." Code name "the dragon' huh. Well if this works I believe new entertainment with be given to our Lords."

Another laughed. Lizzy was totally unaware of what she was truly made for. She was made for fighting. Fighting for the enjoyment of the lords- just like the gladiators of the Greeks.

They gave her fire and now she was going to burn everything to ashes.




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Receria~

Receria smiled and ran up beside Lizzy, turning her metal arm into a large spike. She nodded at Lizzy, as if to say, let's do this.
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As Receria and Lizzy ran the other patients followed behind them. A guard was patrolling the hallway and Receria attacked. Her metal arm turned into a sharp sword like thing and she quickly killed the guard.



pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
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