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*Nikro is like Konahamaru's teacher dude, to Kaylee. Ain't he?*
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its ok..

san= a friend or equal respect with yourslef(your equal)
chan= close friends siblings use it too like niichan, oniichan.
kun= very close friends or perhaps more
sama= lord or ruler highest rank
sensie= teacher


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Ume stared at her." How does she know about that?" She wondered.

The blue haired ninja gave her an angry look." They are not my friends."

Hachiko just smiled."Sure..."

Ume stopped." Shutup. How dare you judge me!"

Hachiko's smile faded." I didn't judge you. I was just kidding."

Ume looked away. Once again she let her anger get in the way.

They soon made it to the training grounds, ready to fight.

Ume and Hachiko stood about 15 feet apart facing each other.

"Ready?" Hachiko asked.

Ume nodded.




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[Kaylee]

Keylee looked around to see if Nikro had followed her. He hadn't, smart move. She was vary careful about not stepping in the mud as it would splash up onto her dress. She wallked away from the playground and the dozen or so kids playing at it. She walked for a long time, or what felt like a long time, just looking down at the ground. When she looked up the playground looked like a miniature set for dolls. She picked a grassy spot on the ground and layed down, staring at the clouds, making shaped in her mind.
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**hey I was just writing for my sis..RoryLegen..she couldn't get on tonight..sorry.. shoulda told you that before**
What the F David Blain!
CHEEZE ITS CHEEZE ITS!
Evan! David Blain enlarged the car while I was still holding it!
Im effing Five Foot Ace of Spades!
Get out of my house you back to the future demon ass!




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~Hachiko~

Hachiko quickly did a mix of hands signals. "Fire strings!" She shouted as hundreds of needles with fiery stings shot from around her and straght towards the blue haired ninja.
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Ume watched the fire jutsu come towards her. She quickly performed hand signs.

"Water bullet jutsu!"

A bunch of huge water bullets flew out of Ume's mouth and towards the fire strings- thus putting them out.

Hachicko dodged the numerous water bullets.

Performing more hands signs." Earth dragon jutsu!" Ume screamed.

A larger dragon shape rock formed out of the ground and roared at Hachicko.




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Hachiko held her kunia close to her face, ready to attack. Ume smiled. She performed another pare of hand signs.

"Dragon's Breath fire jutsu!" Ume yelled.

The rock dragon opened its mouth and a huge flame came towards the white ninja.




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Hachiko~

"Three corner water shield!" Hachi called and a shield of water came in front of her, evaporating the fire.

"Ice Dragon no Jutsu!" She shouted as a white dragon came from behind her, shooting ice needles and Ume.
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The ice needles pierced Ume, but suddenly she turned into a chopped log. Hachicko looked around.

"Where is Ume going to appear?" She wondered.

"Quicksand Jutsu!" Ume screamed.

Hachicko's eyes widened as the ground beneath her feet turned to mushy sand; which slowly began to swallow her up.




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Hachiko~

Hachi quicky used her substitution and hid behind a tree, still breathing evenly. She took out her shurikens and threw them through the steam, hoping to hit Ume.
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Hachicko threw her shurikens into the steam.

"Summoning Jutsu!" Ume yelled.

A huge bangel Tiger jumped in front of the white haired ninja. It growled and hissed at her. Hachicko threw more shurikens at it, but it quickly dogded. The tiger tackled her and pounded her into the open. The tiger pinned Hachicko to the ground. Ume walked in front of them- looking down at Hachicko.

"Don't kill her." Ume told the tiger.

It nodded." Well how was that?" Ume asked.

Hachicko had a smile on her face. Ume gasped. The ninja before her was a clone and it poofed away.

"Damn it!" Ume yelled in her head.

Hachicko was forming a strange jutsu in her hand- chakra forming around her palm.
The white haired ninja ran towards Ume. While the blue haired ninja started to perform hand signs as well. Hachicko was closing in- her hand ready to strike.

Ume's arms began to transform, but she stopped performing hand signs. She closed her eyes. Hachicko saw her stop but she was too close to stop. The attack had struck Ume. Sending her flying and falling to the ground.




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Hachiko~

Hachiko hit Ume with her Resangan, send her flying backwards through the trees. Hachiko quickly chased after Ume a smile on her face.

"Cocky little bitch." She whispered and stopped beside the motionless ninja, who slowly opened her eyes. Hachiko took out a kunia and held it against Ume jugular.

"Now tell me...have you heard anything from the Akatsuki?" Hachiko growled.
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Ume stayed quiet-staring at Hachicko's kunia. Hachicko looked over to see that Ume's summoned beast was still here. It walked towards Hachikco.

"Remove your knife from my master..." It growled.

Hachicko stared at it. Ume remained silent.

"Yami, its ok. She won't kill me." The blue haired ninja told her tiger.

It nodded and poofed away. Hachicko looked back at Ume.

"Well, tell me..." The white haired ninja commanded.

Ume sighed." Its none of your business. So if you want to kill me, go ahead."

Hachicko's mouth was wide open. She didn't understand why Ume would risk it.

" Please, leave...huhuh." Ume breathed.

Her heart was pounding harder, and her eyes began to glow saffire blue. Hachicko jsut stared.



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