This Is the Day That We Die

ELven-Maiden · 2007-08-20T22:59:29Z

omg, last night, I woke up at like 2 and said, "Omg, that would make a totally awesome Storybook!" K, basically, there are four medeival countries: the Desert, the Forest, the Sea, and the Mountains. and here's a little description on all: (The colors represent the colors of the country) The Desert: probably the most skilled open-field fighters, but they have no hope whhen it comes to stealth. They have dark skin and have a very strong sense of honor. If captured, they will try and kill themselves. However, though the Desert is the largest country geographically, it has very few people, and consequentally, a small army. It is ruled by a prince. The Sea More of a defensive army than offensive. Not very good at open feild, but they have the best spies and assassins you can have. They control most of the ports, and it's almost impossible for them to run out of supplies. Most of them have blue eyes and blond hair. The smallest country geographically, but a pretty good population. Ruled by a queen. The Forest : a country that has a lot of fun with war. Mostly consisting of archers (and sometimes sorcerers, but that may just be a well-placed rumor), They enjoy confusing or starving out their enemies before engaging them in battle. They really don't care who wins or loses, and will constantly change alliances depending on which one will be more fun. No sense of loyalty whatsoever. Most of the people have almond-shaped green eyes and olive skin. Ruled by a prince. The Mountains: These people are rumored to dabble in magic, sometimes dark, and are very skilled in the healing arts. Some countries have Mountain captives to heal for them. They are decently good at open battle, and they have no concept of spies. They depend on wits rather than double-crossers. They get most of their supplies capturing caravans that use the passes. Most of them have very, very dark skin and bright hazel eyes that are almost gold. They have small armies. Ruled by a King. (Keep in mind that this is a story, not a war documentation. The continent this takes place on is smaller than Australia, so you have a good chance of bumping into other characters. Also, cities are considered neutral ground, so people from other countries are safe in cities, even if they are given dirty looks and charged somewhat more at pubs and inns.) And, the stupid, stupid rules (head/desk) 1) No god mode, please. It's not fun. 2) Cursing is fine, just don't go overboard. Please. This is pg-13. 3) Blood and gore is great, especially for this story, but don't go overboard on that, either. This is a story, not a war documentation. 4) You can have as many characters as you want, but keep in mind that it's difficult to juggle around fifteen characters. 5) If you want to kill off someone's character, pm them first. But only if they have one other character. 6) Have fun! I will hunt you down if you break this rule...lol ~*~ Name: Kenran Gender: Male Age: 17 Country: Sea Occupation: soldier Appearance: Has short blond hair and green eyes, unlike most people from his country. Average height. Personality: Can sometimes be bitter. Loves to travel. Histroy: Peasant, drafted into the war. Has a younger sister he thinks of often.

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Fri Sep 28, 2007 1:21 am

Writers_Block says... · Fri Sep 28, 2007 1:21 am

Silver

"What was I doing before with Delita, hating him of course, what else?" Silver said, trying to be frustrating.
"Be quiet!" Kenran barked, losing his temper a bit.
"Somebody get him a muzzle!" Silver replied while continuing to push Kenran's buttons.

* Oh. My. God. I cannot think of ANYTHING. Somebody shoot me.

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Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:53 pm

ELven-Maiden says... · Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:53 pm

*shoots WB gladly XD lol jk ((((WB))))*

Kenran's hands clenched and he thought about his carving knife in his pocket, but he decided that fighting will not end this stupid war and getting killed by a Sea assasin won't help anyone.

*But I can't think of anything, either, so maybe someone needs to shoot me....Can someone else add?*

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Sun Sep 30, 2007 1:41 am

Writers_Block says... · Sun Sep 30, 2007 1:41 am

*I can shoot you, but I can't add. Well, I can, but It wouldn't be good.

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Mon Oct 01, 2007 12:05 am

ELven-Maiden says... · Mon Oct 01, 2007 12:05 am

*thanks for shooting me

is anyone else around?*

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Mon Oct 01, 2007 1:29 am

TNCowgirl says... · Mon Oct 01, 2007 1:29 am

*Ya, just waiting for someoen else to post*

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Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:48 pm

ELven-Maiden says... · Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:48 pm

looks like we all are! XD Hello? Anyone besides me, TN, and WB?

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Tue Oct 02, 2007 1:59 pm

Rydia says... · Tue Oct 02, 2007 1:59 pm

Well I'm always here, lurking around but I got a bit confused because one moment my character was with Kenran and the next he was in the other camp. Lol.

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Wed Oct 03, 2007 4:12 am

ELven-Maiden says... · Wed Oct 03, 2007 4:12 am

Yeah, that confused me too....

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Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:06 am

Writers_Block says... · Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:06 am

He was!? I didn't know that! I guess I'm the most confused, I feel slow...

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Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:40 pm

ELven-Maiden says... · Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:40 pm

....Should we, like, backtrack? If so, where to?

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Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:50 am

Writers_Block says... · Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:50 am

Like, the beggening, it was a good story idea, but we didn't go very far with it, mabey a few pages back.

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Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:47 am

ELven-Maiden says... · Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:47 am

Should we establish some sort of plot before moving on? Or do yoo people think we should just plow ahead and see what happens?

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Sun Oct 07, 2007 3:04 am

Alice says... · Sun Oct 07, 2007 3:04 am

I bet I could set at least SOME of this straight, just the part about Luke and Amanta, I just can't think of anything ^-^ i should have said something before shouldn't I?

I just lost the game.

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Sun Oct 07, 2007 3:19 am

ELven-Maiden says... · Sun Oct 07, 2007 3:19 am

I think you're good, now that the story has been stopped for a moment...

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Sun Oct 07, 2007 1:22 pm

TNCowgirl says... · Sun Oct 07, 2007 1:22 pm

Well tell me when y'all are doing what

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