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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:33 pm
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FermentingFruit wrote:
Sunshine wrote:I kind of don't know what to do with Zia. Any suggestions?


Send her to an assassin :D


That would be either very interesting or very bad for her xD
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:37 pm
FermentingFruit says...



I don't mean kill her lol
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:41 pm
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So, Fruit, what if you get requests from two people, wanting each other dead? You get payed the same, but only after you finish the job.. So do you pick after your personal preferences, then, or just don't take either job?

Not that I'm planning anything, just wondering ^_^
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:42 pm
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Leahweird- I mean both. Suggestions either way would really be helpful.

I thought about the assassin thing, but I couldn't find a logical way to get her there. Maybe I'll think it out, and if nobody takes you on, I will. :)
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:57 pm
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If you like, it occurs to me that Amir is doing nothing, and isn;t currently /being/ used for anything plot-wise other than trying to be heir and being manipulated by his younger sibling. He could easily be the person who accosts her outside Saja's room, and maybe together we can find something constructive for them to do.
  





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Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:04 pm
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That was meant to be to \Sunshine if it wasn't obvious
  





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Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:50 pm
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Gah, now I don't know what to do! Could I take Amid to Mori, or would that be bad? Haha. (Is starting to think it's bad)

I can think of more logical thinks to do with Mori, so I think I'll do that. Thanks guys!
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:56 pm
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XD Go for it if you can work it in. I can post for Amir of you need me too.
  





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Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:59 pm
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Bringing Amir with her, you mean? Okay, why not?
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:03 am
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AriaAdams wrote:So, Fruit, what if you get requests from two people, wanting each other dead? You get payed the same, but only after you finish the job.. So do you pick after your personal preferences, then, or just don't take either job?

Not that I'm planning anything, just wondering ^_^


Mori gets paid before the job, simple as that. He doesn't get paid, he doesn't work. So there :P
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:05 am
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Sunshine wrote:Leahweird- I mean both. Suggestions either way would really be helpful.

I thought about the assassin thing, but I couldn't find a logical way to get her there. Maybe I'll think it out, and if nobody takes you on, I will. :)


He's in a local place. People don't know him when he isn't wearing his black cloak. And someone should seek him out, I'll just wait until someone does to post for him again lol
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:15 am
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No, he was relaxing in a bathhouse last I checked. With an assistant. XD
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:23 am
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Public bathhouse, and every good villain needs an assistant. Maybe I'll give him a cat XD
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:39 am
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Okay, posted! Maybe I needed to be a little more detailed about finding hm, then...
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:19 am
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Whether Airan reaches Minnah or is sidetracked is entirely up to you people.
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