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Fri May 07, 2010 1:23 am
LoveableLittleSock says...



A discussion thread for the new storybook "Contracts."
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Fri May 07, 2010 1:34 am
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Hurray!

If you haven't seen this movie... I will internet slap you.
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Fri May 07, 2010 1:38 am
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I have a question. Should my character bring her "customers" to the underground home thing we have going on, or should she go to their homes? Maybe if we do that, there can be an incident where the "customer" wants her to stay after they "finish" their "encounter" but she refuses and he psychically doesn't allow her to leave so she kills him or Noah comes and saves the day like Superman.


P.S. I don't normally use the apostrophes so much but it's because I'm 13 and not used to writing in the mind of a prostitute so I'm just kind of fuzzled at it :)
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I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Fri May 07, 2010 1:40 am
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Ahaha Jasmine, there's a reason why it's underground -- because it's secret xD I'm all up for Noah being superman though, except he'd probably beaten to the ground along with her if he wasn't careful :3
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Fri May 07, 2010 1:48 am
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Noah can take out a knife or something and threaten the dude. Or maybe she'll just poison him *shrugs*
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Fri May 07, 2010 3:29 am
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LoveableLittleSock wrote:...
*gets internet slapped*

Ahaha Jasmine, there's a reason why it's underground -- because it's secret xD I'm all up for Noah being superman though, except he'd probably beaten to the ground along with her if he wasn't careful :3


Are you serious? You haven't seen The Patriot?

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Fri May 07, 2010 11:21 am
Jas says...



I've watched half of it :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Fri May 07, 2010 12:32 pm
tanith14 says...



Oh for feth sake! It's even on youtube for FREE. One of the best movies I have ever seen.
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