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Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:37 pm
Sins says...



I noticed that there wasn't a discussion thread for Vontaria Academy, so I thought I'd make one. Is that okay fictionfanatic...? Or are you going to brutally murder me while I sleep? I'll delete it if it annoys you, don't worry!

Anyways, discuss plot ideas, comments, questions or anything else about the Vontaria Academy Storybook here!

Unless fictionfanatic ends up killing me...


xoxo Skins
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Wed Apr 14, 2010 7:35 pm
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Thanks, I didn't want to have to end up putting things in the thread.
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:38 am
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I don't think Roisin, Dolan and Austin are in the same room as Rhodri and Alex....
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:53 pm
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NO, pundit they are not.
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 2:31 pm
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Well... I suppose they are now... :lol:
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 2:55 pm
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How did they get there?
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:04 pm
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It was fiction actually :lol:
Her character walked in and she said that there was a deaf person and another guy there there; Roisin and Dolan.
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:59 pm
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That just says that they are there. It doesn't say how they got there.
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:01 pm
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I know.
I think that fiction thought that they were already in the same room :smt001
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:29 pm
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it's whatever people just roll with it.

hehe I thought this was funny skins! "She chuckled quietly this time"

I thought she was mute?
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:32 pm
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Mute people can laugh, can't they?
My friend's deaf and she laughs. Mind you, she's only deaf in one ear.

I think mute people can laugh, it's the same as sneezing, coughing e.t.c It's a natural response of the body, so I assume they can.
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:08 pm
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Some mutes can't laugh.
However, the reason she can't talk is that she can't hear to learn, not that she has a defect with her vocal cords, such as having her throat cut and surviving. And I don't think you need to learn how to laugh.
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For the sake of everything...she can laugh. Okay, discussion ended on that!
  





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Thu Apr 15, 2010 8:09 pm
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Thank you! :lol:
Also, as for the reading mind comment, we'll just say that Rhodri projected his thoughts, like you said :wink:
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 10:30 pm
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wow I was just pointing it out because I thought it was funny...
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