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Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:10 am
ScarlettFire says...



Interesting. I like this. Dramatic side story. Now, do we still have plans for Geneva and Myles? Or am I the only one noticing the...tension between Jesse and Myles.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:11 am
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Nope. :D I see it too.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:12 am
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Yes, it's interesting. Myles seems so worried about Jesse....but he seems reluctant to take it anywhere.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:14 am
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Hmmm, what we need is to drag WhiteTiger into this conversation... Dratted timezones!
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:18 am
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That's true. I'll go see if she's on and remind her to come to the DT and talk about Myles and Jesse.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:19 am
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Cool. :)
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:36 pm
WhiteTiger93 says...



**sneaks in**

hehehe. ^^

Yes, Myles cares very much for Jesse. However, he is reluctant to admit he might want more. He realizes that she's his good friend and all but...

well, you know how Myles can be. xD He refuses to admit he likes her more because he thinks that he's not good enough.

Plus he's scared of rejection. xDDD
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:45 pm
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lol. Hey there, Tiger.


Jesse wouldn't reject him. She, er. Cares for him too much.... see, this is tension I'm talking about. They both like each other but are like, scared to commit.

:?
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:48 pm
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They should definitely get put into a life-or-death situation with each other. Then they might spill their feelings... *points at suggestion, jumps up and down*
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:51 pm
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I see it, Dreamy. Good idea....but haven't they, and aren't they still, in a life-or-death situation? Well, not quite alone, but maybe if they think they're going to die?
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:56 pm
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Oooh! Oooh!

Myles could meet your character Dreamy and realize that both he and Jessie were going to die!

However he would ask to sacrifice himself in place of Jessie????

Of course, you're character could stab Myles but he miraculously makes it???

However he could tell Jessie he cares about her more than he's let on...

I dunno...

Stupid? Not dumb?
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:00 pm
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Interesting. Let's keep thinking though. Try to think of other things that have been mentioned, both in the DT and the SB.
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:40 pm
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Hmmmm... let me think... well, Myles and Jesse are still recovering from their last run-in with Darkkon, yes? So.... oh! *lightbulb goes off*

Darkkon decides to figure out the workings of their base, so he disguises himself as a random traveler and stumbles into their camp. And then... after he's earned their trust... he attacks! Eh?

The "is anybody here magical" sentence would be a nice time for me to jump in...

quick! What do you guys think?
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:01 pm
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No, no. Isn't Drakkon already doing something? And I think Myles and Jesse need a break....and to be honest. That idea is way too cheesy. lol. That "is anybody here magical" sentence would actually be a good time for Jesse to say yes b/c she is magical.


Oh, and a side note: Jesse is coughing and like, coughing up blood....so why is she still talking? And on her feet too...? o.O Is she like, not as baad as she seems or is the fact that she's really hurt not obvious?
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 5:02 pm
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Oh, it's kinda obvious. I just figured that she was as tough as nails. ;)
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