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Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:15 am
ToritheMonster says...



So, here's the DT for the Juvenile Telekinesis Compound. Post away.
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:17 am
ScarlettFire says...



Do you have ideas for what the compound is like?
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:34 am
ToritheMonster says...



Yup. Here's the basic layout:

There are several main rooms-
* the interrogation room
* the isolation room/s
* The medication room (called the torture room by patients)
* Bunks
* Cafeteria
* Various offices of workers


You can add in any rooms you can think of. All patients wear white jumpsuits, all workers wear white labcoats with whatever they want underneath.
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:54 am
ScarlettFire says...



Thanks. That will help a lot. :)

Oh, bathrooms and the like. Yes? Can't forget those. :xd:
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:19 am
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Tee-hee. Probably not.
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Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:13 am
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Since everyone else is just arriving, can Jessie have been here for a while already?
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Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:16 am
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Sure. Just don't have her dominate the noobs, k?
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Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:30 am
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Don't worry, I won't. :) She's twelve, and the only version of twelve I know is me, so at most she might muster up enough courage to say "hi".
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Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:51 am
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ah. ok. Oh yes, I remember her profile now. Go ahead.
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 12:41 am
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So I'm thinking we need a solid plot. Here's what I'm thinking, tell me if you agree/ disagree/ have a different idea/ think I'm stupid:

So, Susan survives her little mis-injection, but her powers start going all over the place. She manages to tick off Rory, who does something drastic. Foster intervenes, and seizing this chance, somebody manages to get out (im thinking walk-through-walls girl?). As punishment , Foster does something cruel to all who remain... and the escapist gets in contact with the nice worker. She tries to help some more kids escape... gets caught by other nice worker, who is upset. Um.... I dunno... go from there? I have no idea.
If you have a better idea, PLEASE tell me.
And if you think my idea is stupid but don't have a better one, tell me that, too.
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 2:48 am
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Geez Louise, Foster's so darn evil! I didn't even realize it! Now I'm a little scared to write for him... no matter, I can get over it.

I like the plot. Foster could start picking out his mini-army for some confusion/double agent stuff mixed in.
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:03 am
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Totally! That's great! Woah. I almost chat-spoke that. *shivers*
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:07 am
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I just had a thought... if Foster starts picking out a mini army... wouldn't it be an interesting twist for him to pick Hero to be on it? Or, if she's completely uncooperative, to drug her into it (she is getting put in a straight jacket, after all)? She's obviously one of the more powerful ones, so he would definitely want to choose her......

Hmmm?
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:13 am
Threnody says...



ha that would be funny for Hero. We'll see.
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:22 am
Lydia1995 says...



I like that plot, I can write drastic :D

I don't really have any suggestions for that at the moment but I will have a think.
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