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Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:34 pm
AquaMarine says...



So, I think planning is a good idea. :)

Obviously, the initial plan is for all the characters to be taken to the Experiment House. I will hopefully be able to show a little of what happens at the start, but it's not incredibly important, although we won't rush it!
They will then receive the drug (while asleep) and then wake up.

Depending on what happens to them after the drug, they will wake up in different places.

If they are obviously mutated, then they'll be taken in a sort of cart thing to the back of the building and left to fend for themselves. (This will happen to Dylan, my character, although he'll possibly have a li'l power too ...)
If they are unchanged outwardly, then they'll be put in a room on their own to wake up, to see if they develop a power or not.

After that? Well ... it's up for discussion! Any ideas?
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:59 pm
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Ooh, ooh, pick me, pick me!

What if one of the other cities/countries/whatever hear about this thing and decide to try to get ahold of the mutants themselves?
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:04 pm
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Ah, that's quite a good idea. :) Also, if that happens and the other countries somehow manage to overthrow the king, then that could create further problems of them trying to control the people.

Oh, and by the way, by 'mutants' are you referring to the people who get powers, or the people who get disfigured by the drug? Because the latter are called mutants by the citizens of Garadeth. Maybe we should think up a collective name for people who get powers from the drug? :)
(And if mutant seems like a horrible word for them, then it's not me being judgemental, it's what the citizens of Garadeth call the disfigured people ...)
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:06 pm
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Exactly my point. ^^

I mean both. ;) And I'll brainstorm for a collective name.
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:08 pm
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On an unrelated note, wasn't Ashton the name for one of my old storybook characters? ... *muses* :wink:
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:10 pm
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I have NO idea. Ashton's just the name that came to my head when I thought this guy up. xD
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:10 pm
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XD. I'll look at some point.

Oh, but we probably won't want to concentrate completely on getting to another country? All that travelling would be so boring. Perhaps if they attempt to get back at the king, and are later joined by another invading country? ...
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:14 pm
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I put too much butter on this bagel.
  





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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:18 pm
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Ooh, that sounds good. :D

And JD, there is no such thing as too much butter.
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:21 pm
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D:
but it's all buttery and buttery.
So I think my character is set. Ready to go! =D
  





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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:23 pm
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If you won't eat it, I'll take it. xD I just hope you're good at throwing stuff.
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:26 pm
AquaMarine says...



Throw it to meeeeee!
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:27 pm
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D: I asked first!
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:28 pm
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Er, well, bagels were invented in Poland which is practically England when you think about it.
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:31 pm
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I still asked first. And if they were invented in Poland which is practically England then you probably have more bagels than I do. :P
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