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Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:36 pm
Incognito says...



We needed one, so I made it. :O
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Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:42 pm
Firestalker says...



Okay so, the only idea we have so far is Incognito's idea -
I am also thinking that this fall will kind of change Akira and she will change alliances. I plan on killing her off, but not know. But I think she could reveal the way to defeat the mutants and even infiltrate the mutant base to fight the commander. The reason for this change is because she realized that her malice and greed was only brought on because of her loss of humanity. It was to be human that she wished most of all to be and she would realize that that won't happen if she kills them all. I think she will empathize with them, and the idea could add a fairly good plot twist. ;)


I like it and RedBird likes it too, but the question is, should we just go with it or make the idea a little more interesting?
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Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:26 pm
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I think that if we combine this idea with the big battle-that-really-determines-what-happens-to-the-Earth idea, we might have a good plot line...
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Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:48 pm
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which is...?
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Sun Jan 17, 2010 6:32 pm
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Basically, all of the Saviors set up a sort of base camp, save Daniel and Kit, yadda, yadda, and then the mutant armies attack them, under co-leadership of Commander Blackwood and Azul. This would require Silversun to post, however...
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Sun Jan 17, 2010 6:38 pm
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Which seems to be the only problem we have yet, but how does Akira fit into all this, the new and Goody two shoes Akira? :P :D
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Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:24 pm
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So, the camp would be set up near the river, where they find Daniel and Akira, right?
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Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:31 am
Incognito says...



Well, Akira can kind of fit into it all because she can reveal the way to end it once and for all. Though what that way is is so far a mystery. I am thinking it has to do with the commander in some way. Also, Akira can kind of gain their trust because Daniel can have a say for her because technically she did save his life. ;)
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Tue Jan 19, 2010 11:51 am
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Ahh I see, okay then lets start, shall we?
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Wed Jan 27, 2010 11:53 pm
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Guys, I don't think Silversun is coming back. Maybe one of us should take over her character because I have a feeling this Storybook is nearing its end.


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Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:15 am
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**I can't since I already have two characters that need to be looked after :P. So unless anyone else wants to volunteer you'll have to do it, if you don't mind?**

**What do you think RedBird?**
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Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:13 pm
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I can take Silversun's character if you want. I'm not really a commander-y type person, but it could be fun to order people around. :P
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Sat Jan 30, 2010 1:19 pm
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I can take Silversun's character if you want. I'm not really a commander-y type person, but it could be fun to order people around. :P


:P haha, you can start bossing us around after RedBird agrees, okay?
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Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:16 am
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If Silversun doesn't post anymore, it could be so much fun! It'll be hilarious to order you peoples around, Firestalker! :lol:
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Wed Mar 17, 2010 10:20 pm
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Okay, this is the DT for the old Storybook, but I figure we might as well use it again...
And remember...A portkey can be any sort of harmless object...A football...or a dolphin.
~Snape, AVPM

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