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Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:47 pm
bonnie babe says...



Moo's computer isn't working so she is is telling me what to type, she says 'Hi.'
The humans will attack, not with the intention of killing anyone, however things will spark off whenever Isaac thinks there is a threat and takes a soldier hostage, he will be shot while trying to save Scarlett (if this is correct). Asher will then try to save Isaac and Isaac will be like, 'No.' Each group can then end up fighting the humans and some will probably get hurt. Figure out who you would like your characters to fight beside. I'm hoping Asher and Ezra, etc. will still be friends as this will add to the whole Isaac being annoyed with Asher thing. After the humans are dealt with the characters find out the purpose of the assembly. The head master is leaving; he is being replaced by a human. This is why the soldiers came in the first place.
Sound good?
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Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:00 pm
Nick101 says...



Madmoo I was thinking since you were saying that Isaac over heard the headmaster talk about the human invasion with someone that someone could be Sabina cause she's very close to the headmaster and she hears secrets in the shadows so remember everyone she could be anywhere everywhere.
I wanted Sabina to reassure the headmaster at the auditorium, is that ok? Am I asking to much?
Im talking about Reality's post about the assembly.
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Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:06 pm
AquaMarine says...



That sounds great, Bonnie. Ezra and Asher will still be friends etc etc. Also, is it OK if Ezra gets badly hurt?
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Thu Nov 26, 2009 1:43 pm
Moo says...



So does anyone want to go with Isaac to get the principle back? ^^ He needs some buddehz.
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Fri Nov 27, 2009 3:57 pm
Lauren2010 says...



Well, Lilith isn't very fond of Isaac so it could be amusing if she tagged along. *shrugs*
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Fri Nov 27, 2009 10:01 pm
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i feel like we should all leave the school and run to the forest to live there. They would think it would be safer there and eventually we could be attacked again......?


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Sat Nov 28, 2009 4:53 am
Nick101 says...



Alright Sabina is taking Matthew to a laboratory deep underground. She has a ex-KGB human who works there.
He came with her from Russia. Taelus (thats his name right) knows about this laboratory. The human's name is Raz. He can infiltrate the government system and get the information we need. Where we can then save Taelus. But we will need to get out of the house. Can Sabina have weapons in her lab? then we could use them.
oh by the way you guys will later get to go the lab, just give Sabina a few minutes to get to the lab to open the doors.
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Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:15 am
Buggy says...



Ok, sounds good
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Sat Nov 28, 2009 12:31 pm
bonnie babe says...



Sorry guys I'm ill right now and was only able to get to the computer today, after I have typed this I'm going back to bed...
Moo can you look after Asher for me?
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:42 pm
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pudin.junidf says...



Is there any way in which Matt can Save Serena? I mean Serena is still outside with Scarlett and the other two.(meaning Phelix and Jonathan)
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 11:31 pm
Nick101 says...



well yeah. At the laboratory Sabina will show Mathew all the trapdoors, and which buttons to press so that most people can get (fall/slide) into the lab.
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Tue Dec 01, 2009 3:14 am
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Maybe through there bond? pudin.
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Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:01 am
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Guys, me and Aqua are so lost!
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Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:38 pm
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*raises hand* Me too! *no idea of what to do*
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Tue Dec 01, 2009 9:32 pm
pudin.junidf says...



True Mo.

We can make him helper through that. And help the others that are with Serena as well.
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