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Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:43 pm
Helpful McHelpfulpants says...

If you want to suggest parts and features of the labyrinth, which is so largely fuzzy right now, talk plot and whether there will be any, talk romance and whether there will be any, etc., etc., this is the place! =D
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 2:32 am
Dreamwalker says...

My character doesnt seem to be fitting well into the plotline. If anyone can sort of drag him in, like bring him into a conversation or something, that would be wonderful. He's just a quiet character by nature so it's really hard to make a quiet character jump out at people and enter the plotline.

If anyone has any sort of ideas on how to fix my dilemma then by all means, help me out :)

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