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}Le Château du Seul.}



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Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:24 pm
Flux says...



Bring all discussion here, including small comments like 'When do we start?' Okay? You may also ask to claim someone in here if you're too lazy to PM them.
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Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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Fri Mar 20, 2009 12:55 pm
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Just to clear up some confusion.

We are not vampires. We were called vampires because we were so strange. We looked like 'demons'.

We have no faces except lips, pretty much. XD That's why we wear masks.
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Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:33 pm
phantom of the potter says...



So - Can we start now? And if we do start, do we begin at the masquerade or - what?
  





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Sat Mar 21, 2009 2:40 am
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Yes, we can start. You may start wherever, but it would be in Le Chateau du Seul, and it could be during a party, or during the day. Whichever you'd like.
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Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:06 pm
Bella says...



Question! :)

How did we get like this, exactly? The two characters mentioned who's names slip my mind at the moment were made that way for the king, from what I understand - but we're just meeting them at this masquerade, so how are we also like that?

~bella
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Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:19 pm
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Hiram was the only one left after the 'Forgotten Revolution'. So he changed Hester, first, but then after careful decisition, the two decided that they needed more. Why more? Well, with more people - if they can be considered that - like them, they'll have more of a chance of being accepted into society.

If you want to know exactly how you change, well, you injest this position-thingy, and it feels like its melting and tearing your face off.
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Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:02 pm
Bella says...



So - do we know we're going to be changed, or have we already been changed, or are we being changed at the masquerade, where no one will notice because we have masks on?
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 12:24 pm
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We've already been changed. We're just on the journey to becoming accepted by society again. That's the goal of the story. ;)
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:06 pm
Bella says...



Ah, gotcha!
*nods a few times in understanding*
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:19 pm
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Also ~ Ari and I are wondering how we see if we don't have eyes?
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:28 pm
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And one more xD [I was so about to start that time] I want to make sure I have this right ~

We are attending a masquerade, correct? And it's like a masquerade that many people are attending, both like and not like us?

And would it be all right to start it like the morning of the masquerade?
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 10:11 pm
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Yes, sure. And how we see if we don't have eyes. I never thought this through, but you can get creative any way you like.

Maybe they have eyes so miniscule that they can't be seen.

Or Incognto Temptation thought not eyes was cooler, but this was my second plan-- I can modify it and say they have eyes that are completely blank, but they can still see.

Or they can just have extremely enhance senses.
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 11:21 pm
Bella says...



I'm up for any of those options.
Maybe they're just an odd color, or pitch black? Or something scary happens if a normal person looks into them? I dunno
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Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:09 am
Incognito says...



I said not eyes?
I think I may have broke the rules LaReina! I was confused and I didn't read all the way through.
Joshua was mutated from the Revoultion but he went into hiding before the masacure. He arrived with Hiram and such, but his mutation is different than everyone elses. He is kinf of like a walking Frankinstien. I just thought we should have variety and I will change it if it is necessary. Just read his discription and history if you wish too.
I am sorry LaReina!
I am incompetent.

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Thu Mar 26, 2009 1:26 am
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Also, I have another question.
I know we have already started but there is a person who wants to join the storybook. It will be her first storybook but she is dedicated and an accomplished writer. I believe her character could be very useful in the plot because she is very creative.
Her name is The.Dreamwalker.
Would this be permissable just this once?

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