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Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:52 am
PhoenixBishop says...



You know the drill post questions, concerns , and plot ideas hear.
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Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:55 am
TexanWriter says...



Uh, hey! I was wondering if I could join, and if my profile would be acceptable:



Name: Neoma Aphanius

Age: 17

Gender: Female

House: Yang

Standing: Pawn

Powers: Can communicate with ghosts and spirits. They cannot fight, since they are like wind-ish things, but they make wonderful spies and can go invisible.

Appearance: She has wavy black hair that reaches her shoulder blades and a lot of gray streaks. She had fair skin, is of medium hight, has gray eyes, freckles, and a signature, mischievous cheshire cat smile which you can always see on her face. She wears normal Pawn dresses and such, but always a black cloak over it.

History: She was born into the House of Yang. As a child she worked as a servent in the King's home. Her parents were not very good necromancers, yet somehow, she became pretty good. Now she is still a servant, but a favorite of Their Majesties since she learns valuable secrets.

Weapons: An obsidian dagger. (It was a family heirloom. That's how a pawn got such a grand thing.)

Other talents: Is great at manipulating people and bending them to her will.


Is this okay?
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Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:03 pm
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Get active Yang's.
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:33 am
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General things about Yin and Yang

In the Yang Kingdom the queen is the one with power. In the Yin it is the king.
Yang has healers, Yin does not. Yin has an assassin clan that specializes in killing important individuals. Yang's value Bishops above all, Yin value Knights above all.

Politics.

There are other towns outside of these kingdoms. Towns that are ruled only by lay to the houses, but have no true affiliation with the houses.

Overall the Yang house is more respected because the Queen is fair, and distributes her food and wealth more fair then that of the Yin.


I will be adding more facts about the world later.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

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Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:07 am
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Ok it has ben brought to my atention that a good plot line would be a romeo and Juilet like realationship. So you can pair up within your own clan, but I need to have one couple be from the different clans. I suppose they'll meet in this war.
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:14 am
TexanWriter says...



I would love to volunteer Neoma, but she is already meeting someone in the battle and I think there would be a tiny version of a RaJ (Romeo and Juliet) kind of thing anyways.
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:15 am
Threnody says...



I shall volunteer as back up and supporting actress.
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:26 am
Bloo says...



i will do it, i think it would be interesting for a die hard yin hater to fall in love with one.
  





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Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:40 am
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Ill volunteer my character (Aimee) as either a Juliet or as a "Friar" like character if you catch my drift? Its that character that knows and supports the relationship and helps the couple along to communicate prosperity between the different houses. Aimee is about to get her voice back because it is rather boring to have a character that doesn't speak, at all...
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:46 am
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I SHALL BE ANGRY DISAPPROVING CAPULET!!!
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:57 am
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YAY FOR ANGRY DISAPPROVING CAPULET!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hmm..
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:04 am
Threnody says...



Alright... I'll be Juliet... but don't count on it being juicy romance alright. I'm not good with that. *shivers*
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:08 am
lizzifer says...



ok! ill be the Friar / Nurse character and support ya there!
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:11 am
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Thanks!!!
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:37 am
Bloo says...



well i have been made romeo, so i guess it is done now.
  








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