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Tue Feb 03, 2009 1:02 am
Rosendorn says...



Share any plot ideas, twists, or character changes here. Ask your questions here as well.
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:03 am
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So, where will we all be starting? In my opinion, we should start off with a conference where the students are told about the kidnapping of the Elite's.

Being the spy, I would probably already be there, already informed, right? Is it safe to assume that, since I probably hold a large importance to the Firewing's, as much as everyone else, that while we're on our mission I might have small little ventures of which I do alone?
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 3:31 pm
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Hm, I have this little idea of everyone getting captured and pitted against each other, like in a gladiator arena. They're told that they have to fight to survive, and once they've entertained enough, they can go free. An optional part is somebody (somebodies) getting brainwashed. Of course, this is just my random babbling.
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 8:02 pm
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I don't know if that would work Viper. The whole plot is trying to find the Elite. What might work (based off your idea) is one or two get captured and have to fight the Elite in the way you were describing. Then, the rest of the group would have to go find them. Another twist could be that one member allowed the other to get captured.

And one character has already gotten brainwashed before the storybook started.

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Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:40 am
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Well, I had the idea of my character (Meela, air) being show something on the wind that could help direct us. Maybe she could see one of the Elite being kidnapped and recognizes the kidnapper as she same race as she is? (as my character is a foreigner)
Then we could continue to whatever kingdom Meela is from.
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 6:54 pm
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See all you guys next week. I don't know if I'll have any internet until then, but if I do I'll try to post.
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:09 pm
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Abstract- I like that. It works for your character.

Firestar- Okay. If you can't, I'm sure it won't take long for you to figure out what's going on.
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 9:36 pm
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Rosey- for your idea, I would gladly throw Vincent into the ring against the Elite's. He shows vast loyalty for them, and to have to face them would be a great judge for his character. Would be cool :P

Also, if you are all wanting to suspect someone for being a spy and working for the kidnappers, you can always blame Vincent. He won't be working for them, but he IS a spy, so he DOES seem like an obvious target xD
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 9:52 pm
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Final- Maybe. Thing is, All the characters are pretty loyal to the Elite, so it would boil down to character. That, and who'd be the most likely to get a little messed up after facing them. xD

Character torture is a hobby of mine.....
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:19 pm
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I'm about to leave for the week. Hopefully I'll be able to get one, but if I don't, 'till then!
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:38 pm
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Rosey, I have to agree. Character torture is a lot of fun.
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:40 am
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Okay, we now need to make up our minds as to where we want to go. There are two options at this time:

Rasdont (Firestar's post, elabourated in Billy's)
Kartaroff (Abstract's post)

From the posts, which one should we go to?
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:59 am
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Rosey, I believe Kartaroff was the person she sensed on the wind, that took her mentor o.o We don't know WHERE he is, only WHO he is :P I guess that just leaves us with the R place?
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:23 am
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Yes, but she recognized him as a person from her kingdom. So, that leads us to another place.

Unless Abstract's character is from Rasdont.... which we won't know until she gets back.

Yeah, I guess that's the only real choice.
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 4:38 am
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Whoops.
I meant Kartaroff to be a place. I guess I didn't make that clear. Sorry!
But maybe it would be better for Kartaroff to be a person from Rasdont. At least, it would all fit together nicely. And then we wouldn't have to worry about two different places.
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