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Sun Mar 16, 2008 7:53 pm
cat4prowl says...



Okay, i know its a little strange for me to create this and not bigbad but we need one, badly. Where is the story going? I think we need to create some sort of plot here. Any suggestions?

Okay, here's a list of characters because those always help.

BigBadBear- Nate, 15, male, leader, escaped, can sense the near future

cat4prowl- Blade, 15, female, escaped, had a power but i dropped it

piepiemann22- Sam, 17, male, stayed, excells in combat and tracking

Layleun- Mayze, 14, female, escaped, sees wind currents and can tell people's emotions that way, an innate ability with medicine and herbs, in a relationship with ZT

Black Cat Sachiko- Lyssa, 15, female, escaped?, can communicate with birds

SishBee- Arro, 16, female, stayed, chameleon powers

TNCowgirl- Colt, 17, male, escaped, quick reflexes

Aedomir- Michael, 14, male, escaped?, can change shape into objects

Blue Fairy- Rose, 14, female, escaped, can influence people's emotions

Teh Wozzinator- ZT, 13, male, escaped, improved senses, in a relationship with Mayze

October Girl- Lexy, 14, female, escaped, hacking, being under water and running for long periods of time

sylverdawn- Kei, 16, female, escaped, generates/manipulates energy

Firestar- Reed, 15, male, can convert sun's energy into his own

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I think that's it? Not everyone is active, some may have dropped out, tell me if anything needs to be modified.

Okay, I've noticed we're at a lull in the story at this time. Any suggestions for a plot please share. I think building up relationships right now might be good, friends and romance or whatever. Let me know what you guys think!
  





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Sun Mar 16, 2008 11:04 pm
Layleun says...



I thought I'd help out a bit so I furthered the listing down to the people who are active.

Blade
Mayze
Colt
Rose
ZT
Lexy
Reed

I think that should be our final flock because some people haven't even posted once. As for the story, perhaps we could find Max and the gang?
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:16 am
October Girl says...



and Stella, don't forget Stella 'k? I think that's it.... IDK good work Cat4
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Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:22 am
cat4prowl says...



okay say we were to find Max and everyone, why? because we want to help them? and how would we be able to find them? reply to fang's blog?

im just throwing out questions and ideas, i dont want this one to die.
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:29 am
October Girl says...



I don't think we should find Max and the gang (wow this feels weird saying my own name)
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Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:33 am
cat4prowl says...



y not?
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:34 am
October Girl says...



cuz then what? Pat them and send them on their way? What fun would that be?
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Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:47 am
cat4prowl says...



good point, anyone have any other plot/conflict suggestions?
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:03 am
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How about the Whitecoats are trying to stop us from getting to The Flock.
Admiration: Our polite recognition of another's resemblance to ourselves.

Dopeler Effect: The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.

Confidence: the feeling a person has before he fully understands the situation.

Shin: A device for finding furniture in the dark.
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:16 am
cat4prowl says...



yeah that makes sense, they would probably be worried about that kind of thing. the only thing is, that means more battles. the drama is getting a little old, you know its like oh we're safe! just kidding we're under attack! run! fight! safe! injuries! run! fight...
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 3:32 pm
Layleun says...



Oh lord. More injuries XD That means more plant research. Fun fun fun!
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 3:43 pm
cat4prowl says...



haha yes, but we appreciate it!!
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 4:24 pm
Layleun says...



^.^ It's actually fun being able to learn more about the plants I love so much *hugs medicinal plants books*
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 8:32 pm
Teh Wozzinator says...



Lupe: Lol!

I agree that there's too much "fight, run, pause, fight, run pause..." I don't think we should find the Flock, because we're kind of our own group right now, and besides a few posts on them we're pretty much new... besides the Whitecoats and Erasers. I'm not sure what to do... but we need a change, and I think one that doesn't involve Max and the others. (Besides you, OctoberGirl/Max :D)
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Mon Mar 17, 2008 8:43 pm
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I agree, I'm tired of fight run pause. How about we break it up by making them go to school, or meet new people in some sort of public place, or throw in some romance, or have them find out about something they want to know or need to find or someone they have to be wary about?

^ wow i think i just spilled my brains all over the page...
  








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