Actually, looking back at what I wrote, it takes place in the evening which kind of skips an entire day so maybe it would be best to wait for the white king or another piece to go first, either that or I could add a little at the start to summarise the entire day if that would work?
There are those who say that life is like a book, with chapters for each event in your life and a limited number of pages on which you can spend your time. But I prefer to think that a book is like a life, particularly a good one, which is well to worth staying up all night to finish. — Lemony Snicket
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