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Sat Oct 28, 2017 11:48 pm
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Wolfi says...



Here's an excerpt from Swords' post! Hopefully this helps.

"That's why this is going to be a silent operation," Ed said rolling out several parchments that detailed the outside of the boat and the water levels at different times. They keep their ship away from the dock, but within the bay. We are going at night and at low tide to keep them from sailing off. Victor," the experiment jumped up a little at the call of his name. "Here is what I need you to do. I want you to go underneath the ship and disable the rudder chain. That way they can't steer out of the bay. Covel will take up a position in the church tower and watch our backs while myself, Asun, Alvaro, and Sol head onto the ship and find the princess as quietly as possible."


I think Sofia will be staying behind, but who knows what she will be up to! Victor will probably be the only successful offensive here, since he manages to damage the ship enough that it retreats for repairs.

If you don't want to post just yet, Sonder, someone else (including myself) would probably be able to. But I think this would be a good time as any for a Sol post. Likely they'll get captured very quickly.
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:56 am
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Sonder says...



Oh, thanks. I must have missed that when I was rereading. Will the group of four split up, leading to only Alvaro and Sol being captured, or should there be a standoff with all four, with only two escaping?
Sorry for all the questions, I want to do this right, haha
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 2:53 am
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It's up to you! I trust your judgement and I'm sure anything you write will be right.

If you want, you can have Asun make a big slip-up that causes or contributes to their capture. And if they do split up into pairs to search the ship, I could see Alvaro and Sol each being paired with one of the other two veterans, but it would also make sense for Asun and Ed to be together because of their romantic past.

So yeah, it's all up to you! Have fun with it.
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 3:05 am
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sheysse says...



You could have Alvaro and Sol each put with a veteran, and while the veterans tactically retreat, assuming the inexperienced companions would have the sense to do the same, they're left alone and get captured.
  





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Sun Oct 29, 2017 3:21 am
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ScarlettFire says...



Sorry, I got kidnapped by RL. I think I need to work on a post? I'll go check and stuff.
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 3:25 am
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A post would be great, Scar! If Luca is on El Toro del Mar that's docked at St. Nepo, maybe this could be the first time he sees Victor when he goes under the ship, and doesn't say anything.
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 3:31 am
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Sonder says...



Alright, last question: how are they going to get on the ship? Boat, swimming? Did we discuss this already? Haha sorryyy

I'll try to get my post done within a couple days!
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 3:54 am
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@Wolfical, good idea! I'll see what I can do.
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Sonder, that's a good question xD Maybe the ship is anchored to the docks in such a way that you can just walk on, but of course it will be guarded so they'll need distractions (or a sharp knife).

Scar, yay!
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 4:19 am
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Alright, I'll figure something out, haha
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Wed Nov 01, 2017 12:18 am
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POSTED
Please let me know if I messed up anything plot-wise or character-wise. I didn't get up to the capture quite yet but wanted to set it up for anything you want to do with Asun's possible mess-up, @Wolfical? Is that okay?
I want to keep this alive! I want to write Sol being interrogated and irritated with Alvaro more! So post, people, post!
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Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:41 pm
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@Sonder! That post is amazingggg! Gah, I love the suspense, and you portrayed Asun very well. Great job!

@regismare and @ScarlettFire, now would be a good time for you guys to post since we could see Victor or Luca's perspectives of what's going on. In any case, I'll try to write up a post soon.
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Wed Nov 01, 2017 9:10 pm
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@Wolfical, ah thank you! I'm so glad you like it and that I got Asun right. :)
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Wed Nov 01, 2017 10:40 pm
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ScarlettFire says...



I’m free today so that’s on my list of things to do. Gotta grab Desi for the post, though. I think that’s @Lael?
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Thu Nov 02, 2017 2:26 am
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Lael says...



Right @ScarlettFire. Let me know if you need help.
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