Hey @backroadstraveler nice post!
Just one thing: I saw that you didn't mention Oren, who was last seen paralysed on the floor in front of her, before she started to help him get to the infirmary. That's okay, but it's just that I was hoping for a continuation from that scene so that I could have some more structure for my next post.
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