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Darken Private Academy for the Supernatural DT



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Fri Feb 26, 2016 2:12 pm
LordZeus says...



@TheForgottenKing I see that you have not responded to what I said earlier, so I am tagging you again to remind you. Also, @Basil please tag me when you next post for Rayne, I'd love to see what happens between her and Arthur.
  





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Fri Feb 26, 2016 2:43 pm
TheForgottenKing says...



@MariaRowlands50

Sorry, SB is closed. Need to get that put up... I will however let you know if anything has changed, I solemnly promise.
"I make my own luck"- Shay Patrick Cormac
  





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Fri Feb 26, 2016 2:58 pm
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She uses her main account now: @MariaRowlands
  





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Sun Mar 06, 2016 8:31 pm
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HazelGrace16 says...



Dont let this die!
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Sun Mar 06, 2016 8:43 pm
Chaser says...



I don't know what to do, to be honest. I joined thinking I'd get to write some supernatural battles, but we've only had romance and typical high-school hijinks so far. This is supposed to be a storybook about the species' powers and escaping Darken, right? Personally, I think we could focus a bit more on that aspect. While we're doing fine as is, I want to capitalize this story's unique points. But, in the end, it is a collective choice, and I am only a small part of it.
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
  





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Sun Mar 06, 2016 11:56 pm
TheForgottenKing says...



I agree wit ya @Chaser

Ill start working on a scene, than let ya guys follow. Possibly Daemon goes at the therapist guy ( @HazelGrace16 ) and decides to leave and begins on a way of getting out. Any other ideas?? I'd love to hear them!!
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Tue Mar 08, 2016 1:13 am
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Basil says...



I'm really sorry everyone I was at home for a week because I'd gotten a really bad sunburn after four hours of paddleboarding. My feet swelled up really bad and I couldn't walk properly, and my shoulders got really bad because sunburn+eczema= many painful moments for Basil. I can get a post up either today or tomorrow!! Terribly sorry for the week's absence.
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Tue Mar 08, 2016 2:58 am
Ciblio says...



No worries! Hope you're doing better.
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



previously:
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Tue Mar 08, 2016 4:13 am
LordZeus says...



No need to apologize @Basil . I hope you feel better now.

Just please remember how I mentioned Rayne in my last post when you post please.
  





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Tue Mar 08, 2016 4:48 am
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Basil says...



Of course, of course.

I need to figure out how to incorporate Ximena and Arthur in post though.

And thank you <3
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Wed Mar 09, 2016 6:55 pm
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BTW @Basil could you please tag me when you post next? Im eager to see how Rayne thinks of Arthur now.
  





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Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:16 am
Basil says...



Yeah, of course ^^ I just don't know when I'll have my next post up, is all
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Sat Mar 12, 2016 7:51 am
LordZeus says...



That's fine @Basil take your time. Out of curiosity, when do you think you'll be able to post next? I just wanted to know.
  





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Mon Mar 14, 2016 2:07 am
Basil says...



This week hopefully. I need to find the time. Although I've pretty much finished my English assignment, and art I can do in one afternoon. I hope
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Tue Mar 15, 2016 7:57 am
LordZeus says...



Great @Basil . I can't wait to read it :D
  








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