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Thu Feb 18, 2016 5:47 pm
LordZeus says...



no one who attends the school has been outside the establishment since they enrolled.


@Gravity actually, according to the SB plot, you aren't. Once you're in the school, according to the SB description, you're not allowed out.
  





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Thu Feb 18, 2016 7:30 pm
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I don't remember saying that, rules are changed to the way I've worded them now. @LordZeus
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Thu Feb 18, 2016 10:41 pm
TheForgottenKing says...



All right my minions, who wants to go next?? Or we can start the rotation again^-^
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Thu Feb 18, 2016 11:08 pm
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I'm trying to get Fenny's joining Aviantus up, probably within the next day.
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Thu Feb 18, 2016 11:11 pm
Ciblio says...



I should have my post up for Ximena by tonight.
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'


previously:
GuyFieri
  





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Thu Feb 18, 2016 11:22 pm
TheForgottenKing says...



All right sounds good!!
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Fri Feb 19, 2016 3:57 am
Basil says...



@LordZeus I'd imagine they'd go for a walk or something, have a picnic maybe? And the whole not leaving the school means the school grounds I'd imagine, not the building complex. Am I right? But I'm glad you liked the post ^^
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Fri Feb 19, 2016 5:33 pm
LordZeus says...



Ok thanks @Basil, I'll start planning my post at once (Wow, I'm more like Arthur than I realized :P ).
  





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Sat Feb 20, 2016 1:11 am
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@GuyFieri I love your post, it is brilliant :D
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Sat Feb 20, 2016 6:44 am
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Finally got another post done, just a quick background-flesh and house-joining for young mister Blitzwell.

Also, to galvanize a bit of action to kick this off, I humbly suggest
Spoiler! :
my introduced character Eldritch A. Bonnasion to be the first boss. The idea here is that he's actually a powerful demon of the ocean, kind of like Cthulhu. Maybe he could try to attack the human students for their blood/flesh/power, prompting people to try and stop him. This could give a glimpse into the school's more militaristic structure, bring our protagonists a quick meeting in battle, etcetera etcetera.
It's merely a suggestion, in case anyone wants to bring in more action-oriented scenes or plot.
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Sat Feb 20, 2016 2:43 pm
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I'm going to post by the end of the weekend!
hello there
  





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Sat Feb 20, 2016 9:12 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Posted!

Whoo Romance!
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Mon Feb 22, 2016 6:29 pm
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Posted! @Basil @Chaser I mentioned your characters in my post, so please tell me if you want me to change anything. Sorry about the length.
  





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Thu Feb 25, 2016 8:40 am
MariaRowlands50 says...



Can I please join?
  





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Thu Feb 25, 2016 10:08 am
LordZeus says...



@TheForgottenKing is the current SB mod, so he'll have to decide that @MariaRowlands50
  








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