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Thu Nov 19, 2015 11:44 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Do it!
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Fri Nov 20, 2015 5:38 pm
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@Lau2001 Is it okay if Dr. Hernandez is with the FBI agents when they attack?
  





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Fri Nov 20, 2015 5:42 pm
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I've been a bit lazy with posts, haven't I? I might be able to do one soon, though. Could I borrow Carlos, by any chance?
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Fri Nov 20, 2015 7:18 pm
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Yes to both questions. May I ask for what though, @Chaser ?
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Fri Nov 20, 2015 8:30 pm
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Posted. Nothing important happens but it was fun to write...
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Fri Nov 20, 2015 8:38 pm
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Cute post @Lau2001
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Sun Nov 22, 2015 9:05 pm
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Is there anyone who really really wants to post? Cause if not I could do something.
Awkward conversation with Leon, anyone? he really hasn't bonded with anyone but Kir and Matt maybe Carlos...looking to strengthen his relationship with Astral and Scar

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Sun Nov 22, 2015 9:58 pm
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I could do a quick one with Matt and scar leading into a conversation between scar and Leon if that's okay.
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Sun Nov 22, 2015 10:15 pm
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I say that because it seemed like @Chaser wanted to do something with Carlos. Just let me know @TheFantasy14 :)
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Sun Nov 22, 2015 10:25 pm
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@HazelGrace16 that sounds perfect.
  





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Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:06 am
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Posted!
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Thu Nov 26, 2015 12:44 am
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@TheFantasy14 So what's the sort of plan going from here? After all the farmhouse stuff I mean.
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Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:45 pm
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Who wants to post next? Where are we heading? Should we do a sort of suggestion thing to see what everyone wants to do after the army storms in?
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Sat Nov 28, 2015 8:32 pm
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Fanty is kind of MIA right now so I don't know what we are gonna do. I do have an idea though. When the army storms in how about the team is split up into unlikely groups to improve character relationships, and put new strains on different survival situations?
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Sat Nov 28, 2015 8:50 pm
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To add upon that idea: What if the army shows up, is repelled by the Heroes, then pulls out Ying? Then they'd all have to work together, implementing Astral's plan to divide Blak's consciousness, and attempt to destroy the demon. Of course, this plan fails, and Astral, Ying, and Kirsten are all possessed by Blak, who shoves their souls into a dream-world while he wreaks havoc on everyone.

Fanta and I have been discussing this plot-point for a while. Recently though, I've had another idea with it. What if Blak is able to gradually spread his influence into other people, until he basically has his own army he controls as one? Then it becomes a bit of a three-way battle for humanity. Although, since Blak is the Big Bad, this implementation would probably cause the arc to conclude the SB unless we create another villain.

Thoughts?
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