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Camp of Almost-Heroes



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Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:13 am
Holysocks says...



My computer was out of commission >.> No seriously, it was! D:

I should be posting soon. Sorry I've been rather lazy so far, but I'm planning on improving. >.<
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 1:47 pm
ladcat13 says...



You're good! We get it- technology fails sometimes. My iPhone 4 has chosen this most opportune moment to begin dying, so I'll need a new one soon. As long as someone's going to post I'm happy! :D

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In the swirling of this storm
When I'm rolling with the thunder
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 6:11 pm
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Yeeah, we seemed to be at some form of standstill..
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 6:14 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



#justposted
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Tue Apr 07, 2015 12:10 am
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Every SB reaches a standstill at some point or another, and possibly more than one. What defines the good ones from the bad is which ones persevere

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Wed Apr 08, 2015 11:42 pm
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Im so annoyed!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't see any posts past Happyslappy's!!!!! What do i do!!
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 11:47 pm
AMDDOG says...



fixed it!
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Sat Apr 11, 2015 2:42 pm
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Righto then, I've got next post!

Millions of miles from home
In the darkness before the dawn
In the swirling of this storm
When I'm rolling with the thunder
But bleed from thorns
Leave a light, a light on.
  





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Tue Apr 14, 2015 9:06 pm
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Okay. I've finished the next post, sorry it's so long, but most of it is dialogue and I always indent each new speaker's line as well as putting a line between... you know... formatting and such. Also Sharrae, I took a turn with Blade, sorry if I didn't do a good job with her. I kind of had a thought that maybe Blade could become the main conflict of the SB- like she starts to gain dark powers and her soul starts to be corrupted by them. She might start to become a threat to everyone in the camp, forcing everyone else to work together both with and against her. It would really start up the character development and the plot events and such. What does everyone else think?

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In the swirling of this storm
When I'm rolling with the thunder
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Tue Apr 14, 2015 10:45 pm
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I think its a good idea but it really only matters that Sharrae agrees. Does anyone want me to post next?
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Wed Apr 15, 2015 1:26 am
Holysocks says...



I'm working on a post right now, finally.
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Wed Apr 15, 2015 3:58 am
Holysocks says...



I'm not proud of it... but I DID IT!

Also, Sharrae, I think this would be an interesting prospect with your character, seeing as ice doesn't really work around her.
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Wed Apr 15, 2015 6:12 am
ChimeraMania says...



I actually like that and think it's a good idea. She's already close to losing control over herself, remember the scorched spot? See she loved Kin so much, she found out he knew he was dying beforehand and him dying just tipped the balance on her self control more. Then coming to camp because of Kin.....you get where I'm going? SO yea, I agree with the idea and glad I came up with a person that could create/spark this idea.
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Wed Apr 15, 2015 6:24 am
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@ladcat13 perfect, and I know what that look was and what, more, whom she was thinking about.
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Wed Apr 15, 2015 6:29 am
ChimeraMania says...



OMGOSH I just thought of something really good for the skating seen. Since they are going to be around ice and Blade happens to be fire. The TTA will ask her to take off her coat and she blows up about it and ends up melting the icy lake. How does that sound?? If it sounds good I'd like for some else to write it in there, that way it's like getting a view about her from some else perspective. How does that sound??
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