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Sat Sep 12, 2015 6:07 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



Thanks. :)
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Wolfi says...



Great setup, @Rydia! :) There's so much delicious conflict going on...
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Sat Sep 12, 2015 6:56 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



I'm glad to see you're still with us, @Rydia!

@QueenOfHearts is the only one who cannot post due to my delay, but everyone else is welcome to do so.
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 2:35 am
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SpiritedWolfe says...



It is done! :DDD That took way longer than it should have.

I'm excited to see Hunter's posts and then have this start rolling again~ ^^ (We've almost hit a year of searching for that diamond :3)
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 7:27 am
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We should totally celebrate the anniversary once we get there! ;)

Great posts, both of you! It seems the phrase "the plot thickens" is especially true concerning the recent posts.
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— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2015 7:42 am
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Great posts from my side too guys...

And I have started working on a post involving all three the characters I control, so be prepared for more plot-thickening and tension... :P
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 9:44 am
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Thanks, I've had the page bookmarked forever and finally got a chance to jump back in! :)
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 11:21 am
SpiritedWolfe says...



I'm so excited ~ ^^ All the lovely posts have started flowing again!

(Numbers, can Morn just one day almost murder/severely maim Xavier? xD I get the feeling he really wants to do that.)
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 4:30 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



@SpiritedWolfe, it seems your characters have a knack for getting into deadly situations (I have a little plan in store for Aaron, so...)
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 4:33 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Sweeeet~ (I love breaking characters until they physically cannot and mentally don't want to go on. And then make them anyway ~ ^^ So have fun with Aaron! Besides, the moment she stayed with the Callitrix was the moment she threw her life away.)
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 4:41 pm
StupidSoup says...



Perhaps, although the goal for Morn is to become a better person through Aaron .3.
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 6:53 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



Maiming - or at least injuring - Xavier can be what helps him realise he has to become a better person. :D

I love how that smiley contradicts completely with the sentence before it. XD
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 7:28 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Remember, I have a grand plan involving each character, even Xavier, so please don't kill him (for now...)

Spoiler! :
And yes, that for now part suggests that one or more of the characters won't make it to the sequel. Including one of my MCs
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Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:55 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Okay, so I am planning to post in all my SBs on Wednesday (come hellfire or floodwater...) so if anyone wants to get a post in before ne (I'm looking at you @AstralHunter... Less play more work... :P )

Does anyone want to ask something before I make my post?

Oh, and @Rydia, after our dear friend Hunter posts (and I do) you have my permission to enter the Observatory and stir some tension... Then the race will begin... Maybe some of the servants (remember- brown garments, white goat insignia) exit the tower for some herbs or wood, use your rainbow cells (my name for brain cells used for creativity))
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 12:37 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



THERE!

6909 words. This may be my longest ever submitted text, but I seem to break that record at least once every few months, so I'll have to go check. Still, this post is so long, it takes up more than half the page currently allocated for page three. That's a lot. O_o

(If you didn't understand that last part, just look at the position of the slider at the right of your screen when you get to the start of the post.)

1. Anyway, @TheClockworkConjurer, you can get off my case now. :P
2. @QueenOfHearts, you may finally feast your eyes on this three month-overdue plot twist! I hope you enjoy it. We should chat/speak before your next post if you plan on incorporating my post's content into your next one.
3. @Wolfie36, @SpiritedWolfe, @15253, and @Rydia, thank you for your patience as well.

PS: The June, July, and August challenges were created specifically with my post in mind, yet now I submit it when no challenge has been made. That is some sad irony.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  








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