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Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:25 am
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kayfortnight says...



Oh, you're going to work together on the post? Okay then. I'm just trying to figure out how to write my first post without interacting with Rhames in it.

I just had a semi silly idea. At the end of my post, my character walks in on the three of them as Rhames finishes up his conversation with Sita. Cue annoyance from all. Anybody have a problem with that?
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 2:02 am
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I did say I was waiting on Aria in one of my previous posts, and as for your idea, I have no qualms with it.
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 6:22 pm
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I don't know how big the kingdoms are, but I'm assuming it'd take a few days for information to travel between them. Just something I'll take into account in my spymaster posts.

Unless she's lucky enough to have a magician spy somewhere who can send messages quicker.
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 7:52 pm
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Just chiming in with a tiny thing. Kay, Rhames doesn't actually ever get naked (not in normal sense of the word), he always leaves as many clothes he can on without it being too complicated xP So he'd be in his short at least, but I imagined he would've maybe even gotten dressed (depends what Sita said to the "join us" part xD). So maybe make that into him straightening up some tiny fold on his shirt or something? c:

By the way, he's so much like me and so much unlike me at the same time, it's so weird to write him xP

Almond, what did you plan on happening in that post of yours?
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 9:41 pm
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Sorry, read that but forgot to take it into account. Wil fix.
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:45 pm
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I have no idea whatsoever xD We need to get together and crunch some brainstorming.
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:48 pm
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If you want something to start from, Ardryll can get pissy with Sita for interrupting and you guys can go from there.
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:01 pm
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Wait what was Sita interrupting?
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:27 pm
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...did you read that post of mine?

She was interrupting R and Ard just as they were about to switch from words to action, to put it very lightly. Then R invited her to join in, in a very casual way, not like an order.

Also, and this goes for everyone, not that I don't like brainstorming and stuff, but if you're saying you're waiting for me for days, I'm assuming you at least have a basic idea, otherwise it doesn't make too much sense, seeing as when I do get free we'll end up spending hours on trying to figure what happens instead of actually writing.

Elves's suggestion works for me~ I think R would be kind of amused by his reaction, and not really acting particularly kingly at all, so that can make Sita mad if you want her mad. Or.. whatever, I don't know.
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Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:50 pm
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I guess I misunderstood. And I doubt it would take that long, but like I said, i'd like to IM you, but I never see you in chat when you're on.
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Tue Jun 17, 2014 12:01 am
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That's because I never have enough time to stick around when I'm on, and I'm always on iPad/Phone, so chatbar isn't all that fun to handle in any case. I suppose I'll find time to be around in next few days, though.
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Tue Jun 17, 2014 12:15 am
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Alright then, and I do have an idea of what could happen, though i'm stumped on a reason she would have to going to see him.
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Tue Jun 17, 2014 1:23 am
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kayfortnight says...



She's war chief, right? Well, the country is currently at war, or at the very least, close to it. Do like I did in my post and make up some problems to enrich the world. Perhaps she's having trouble recruiting soldiers or supplying them. Perhaps she needs more funding for the troops. Perhaps she wants the King to take on bodyguards because she feels he's unsafe in the current political climate. Get the idea?
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:10 am
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So id like to do a fire soldier but i was wondering if a craft could be like a knight or a mounted soldier. Thanks
  





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Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:13 pm
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I think the closest craft to a knight is swordsmanship, but it would be cook if the soldier had a craft of horses maybe?
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