I took care of explaining why the ship stopped, then added additional damage. The idea of a gravity mine just sort of occurred to me; and it seems to be quite dangerous, especially if you place one in an asteroid field.
Adelaide is now out in the open; she's been around the entire time actually, but just in observer mode. I was thinking that she could offer to help Roan; while Grif remains undercover aboard the ship. She might change her name in order to avoid the Adelaide-Grif connection; but if Roan recognizes her it's fine.
Hopefully this doesn't step on too many toes...
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