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Fri Feb 01, 2013 10:09 pm
StellaThomas says...



Then maybe they can be more vigilante sorts? It'd be interesting.
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Fri Feb 01, 2013 10:12 pm
Alvarin says...



AriaAdams wrote:I hope you do know that you can't kill Whitelighters, though (it says so in the link Alvarin gave us earlier in this topic, on wiki)

Actually, if you read the little description that I wrote, I added that dark magic works like poison on them. I don't think it's any fun with a character who can't die :P

I like the police idea, by the way.
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It would! They're both aiding the law, sort of, and breaking it, most definitely.
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Fri Feb 01, 2013 10:15 pm
StellaThomas says...



Exactly. Or the Winchester brothers.
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Fri Feb 01, 2013 10:17 pm
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Precisely.
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Fri Feb 01, 2013 11:09 pm
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Sorry but due to other commitments I'm going to have to pull out.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 12:22 am
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That's too bad Lothbrok! I'm sorry to hear that :(
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:03 am
KingLucifer says...



Underground Head Hunters not what I wanted Night Hunters to become.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:23 am
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I think there should be a special unit (military or police, I don't know) that takes care of the supernaturals that doesn't follow the law. If there isn't, then who is going to stop them? Normal policemen wouldn't be able to deal with them.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:27 am
veeren says...



Ooo, what if they were made up of other supernaturals?
Who better to deal with vampires than vampires themselves?
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:34 am
KingLucifer says...



Hey if you want, I'm not going to change Reyla to some sort of demon, or vampire, or werewolf.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:36 am
veeren says...



I say change her to whatever you want, as long as she's not trying to take over the world.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:48 am
KingLucifer says...



What, you guys really didn't like what I had planned for Kira? Meh, it was my first attempt at World Domination, but oh well, I can try again some other day.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:54 am
veeren says...



Kira as a character was great, it's what you were trying to do with her that I didn't like. The story is about different alliances fighting over a Vampire Mate, not about Kira trying to become Queen of the world.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 4:23 am
KingLucifer says...



Well I'm sorry I got carried away, I just tend to think on a much greater scale about things, and I get carried away because of such thinking.
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