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Sun Dec 20, 2015 8:00 pm

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Lefty says...

Okay, so I was getting a little confused on when exactly things have been taking place since we haven't been putting dates or anything at the tops of our posts, so I went through and sort of figured it out. I'll post a full list ~~I'm not OCD at all...~~ but the main thing that I realized was that the last two posts (by Riley and Ryker) would have to be on Monday of the next week unless they have school on Saturday.

Which is fine, it just means that there's currently a two-day gap with posts.

I came across one issue... Edit: Which has been fixed! Jinx's last post now takes place three days later than it originally did. I've updated the timeline.

Anyway, here's the list I figured out:

Spoiler! :

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Sun Dec 20, 2015 8:29 pm

Sonder says...

Oh. That is confusing, and mostly my fault.

I wasn't keeping track. @LeftyWriter I can change it so that Jinx's episode happens the same day as Ryker, or I could make it so Ryker's post takes place earlier than I have it now. It's a quick fix, either way. What do you prefer?

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Sun Dec 20, 2015 8:40 pm

Lefty says...

That's okay, Nightcrawler. I think it would make more sense for Jinx's post to be changed over Ryker's, since Ryker's is tied to Riley's. But technicly, I'm not sure any posts need to change. Jinx's part could happen before Ryker's. Ryker's problems don't have to affect Layla's decision to see Jinx.

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Sun Dec 20, 2015 8:59 pm

Sonder says...

Okay... so am I changing anything in the posts? I'm still a bit confused.

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Sun Dec 20, 2015 9:06 pm

Lefty says...

Basically it's up to you. Would you rather change Jinx's post so that he was sick for almost a week before morphing, thus Layla still finding him after the Ryker part? Or would you rather Jinx's whole part happen before Ryker's, taking place over the weekend, thus not having to change anything?

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Sun Dec 20, 2015 9:09 pm

Sonder says...

I'll change it so that he's been sick for a week, so that Layla's post isn't going back in time. That's an easy fix to make.

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Sun Dec 20, 2015 9:23 pm

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Lefty says...

Ok, sounds good. Thanks, Nightcrawler!

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 2:12 am

Lefty says...

Wow, guys. I'm sorry that ended up being so long. There was a lot of stuff I needed to fit in. Oops... Anyway, I had a lot more character interaction in this post than I usually have with Layla, so please please please let me know if I didn't do your characters justice or if you'd like me to change anything to make it seem/sound more like them. Thank you!!!

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 2:32 am

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Europa says...

Riley was adorable! Just like her to unwittingly say something stupid.

On that note, I have a great idea for some dialogue with Riley and Jinx. Maybe she goes to see Ryker in the hospital and gets room numbers mixed up and ends up in Jinx's room. She tries to make conversation, and eventually comes out with "So...I heard there was a tiger in your neighborhood. Crazy, right?"

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 3:40 am

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HazelGrace16 says...

Okay posted!

I explored Mikes and Emma's relationship in this part. I hope I didn't get it wrong @Stegosaurus

Plus some new mysterious backstory for Em. Whoo! Go posts.

Also well done @LeftyWriter

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 3:48 am

Lefty says...

Yay, thanks guys.

I like that idea, Fantasy. Oh, and that reminds me... With how beat-up Riley got, it would be a good opportunity to explore their ability to heal faster.

Gonna go read Emma's post now.

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 4:54 am

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Sonder says...

Wow, @LeftyWriter. That was a really impressive post.

The tiger scene was just how I imagined, and the part with Ryker being taken away was a great touch too! So excited to continue, I think the story is really picking up! :3

@TheFantasy14 Haha, that could be an interesting interaction. I'd be up for it.

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 7:56 am

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Chaser says...

...seeing as how we've created perfectly hateable bullies here, I was wondering if Neon could deal with a few, kitten-of-darkness style. Unless any of you have other plans, or would rather not watch Neon be legitimately terrifying.

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 8:48 am

LordZeus says...

Very good depiction of Dan, @HazelGrace16. You portrayed his awkwardness well

I can see his relationship with Emma growing. Oh and do you mind if I show some interaction between Dan and Emma fully morphed in my next post? Well I won't exactly be interaction, and neither will know that it was the other one, but they will meet. Is that ok? Oh and @Chaser don't forget about Terence Matthews is my first post. Being a bully and having a crush on Layla would make it even more interesting to see how Neon brings him down

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 6:18 pm

HazelGrace16 says...

Yeah that works! @LordZeus

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