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Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:16 am
Sunshine says...



Careful about what kind of revenge you extract- she is pretty powerful when it comes to vengence and craziness, my character is. Also, I'd have him freak out a little on Kelly until she redirects the fact to Calypso. Just an idea.
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:19 am
Redfang18 says...



All he'll do is give her a nightmare by using some uneasy emotions. Nothing too harmful. Just an uneasy emotion or two and he's done with her.
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:34 am
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KingLucifer says...



Is the spelling better for you Redfang?
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

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Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:04 am
Sunshine says...



Actually, that sounds perfect. Calypso won't mind all that much, 'cause the starting of her visions come through her dreams. Pharaoh doesn't know that, though. I'll have fun making up that dream. :)
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 7:49 pm
Redfang18 says...



Just a few uneasy emotions to mess up her dreams and there ya have it- Pharaoh's exact revenge against Calypso. Nothing physical or mental. You'll have work with the emotions Pharaoh selected to exact his revenge. Before that, he'll need something to get him in the dorm without getting him in a heap of trouble.
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 7:50 pm
KingLucifer says...



Read my latest post in the SB Redfang.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

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Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:05 pm
Redfang18 says...



I have, twice. I just need some time to post.
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:09 pm
KingLucifer says...



Right I got all day.
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:01 pm
Redfang18 says...



Whadda ya think about my post, MLH? Was I good?
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:02 pm
KingLucifer says...



Oh yea its good I need some time to post tho.
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Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:02 am
Redfang18 says...



Leave it to Neferet to cut a conversation short. That's gonna make Pharaoh ticked if Neferet keeps sending Kelly away when she's about to tell him something.
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Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:04 am
KingLucifer says...



Ha yep, but shes a healer so if Pharaoh wants to exact revenge then he'll need to get better.
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Sun Mar 25, 2012 1:28 am
Redfang18 says...



I'm not posting as Pharaoh until FA does as Neferet.
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Sun Mar 25, 2012 1:49 am
Sunshine says...



Okay, you guys totally ignored my last post as Caylpso... :(
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Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:24 am
ForsakenAngel says...



I'm sorry... have her re-enter the temple and we'll go from there. How about that? :)
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